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Student's Sweet Success

Students studying Social Studies Sacrificing under the sun shine So sudden, so sad But sharp mind shining on They share, tiredness they spare At last they survive!! Shamelessly showing their Sweet success

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/23/2012 6:32:00 PM
Love this...I had some 7th grade students once who enjoyed writing alliterations. This is a fine one you have written here. Cynthia
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Date: 8/23/2012 8:42:00 AM
Good job and well written Mary. - oxox // love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2012 8:14:00 PM
great experimentation. I think you understand alliteration very well!!! like the format of going down from right to left as well.
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:44:00 AM
ops! it's just a experimentation; but you came up with a great and so sweet output! Congratulations!!!!
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