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Stuck In the Snow

I was snuggled 'tween the bosoms of my mother Stuck in the snow as the whirling wind blows Trapped inside the car, us...alone My mom's car would not start The battery died or it must have been frozen If I recall, I was just four years old I remember that day well...I was very cold The wrong day to shop- mother had chosen We were at our towns Mini-Mart We had no telephone Shivering still- she found a way to warm my toes Old socks, must have been left by my brother I knew mom would warm me...one way or another Wiping the boogers dripping from my nose My dad, worked late; asleep at home Never were they apart He was too tired to shop with us...I suppos'n It's been so long, since this story's been told A Little Memory -My Invented Form- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France 12-29-2020

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Date: 1/21/2021 3:47:00 AM
It is good that your mom saved you to tell the story. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Date: 1/19/2021 12:04:00 PM
Charles, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, excellent poem, I love it _Constance
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Date: 12/29/2020 11:17:00 AM
Hello Charles Messina, I hope all is well with you. I hope you had a good Christmas. It is no fun being stuck in the snow. A cold day is no fun to shop in the mall. Enjoy your day my friend. Happy New Year.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/30/2020 3:46:00 PM
I am wishing you a Happy New Year. May it be a good yeqr for you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 12/29/2020 8:35:00 AM
Oh, just reading it I can feel the nipping cold. Great imagery, Charles, good luck in the contest. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/29/2020 5:48:00 AM
Wow! Scary indeed!
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Date: 12/29/2020 4:16:00 AM
Wonderful, Charlie. I love it... Such a great memory of your Mom. Love this. God B L E S S you always. Happy New Year!!!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/29/2020 4:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina! Happy New Year to you as well...God Bless my dear friend!
Date: 12/29/2020 3:53:00 AM
Charlie, you can't get any more real than the memories you've recreated in the lines of your poem. It's from the heart. Soup mail.
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/29/2020 4:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna. One of my oldest memories...I may have even been 3 years old (lol). Hugs Charlie

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