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I dream a dream stuck in a Christmas globe. My feet can't touch the ground's shimmering cloak. I'm slowly soul drifting, drifting away. I'm stuck here in between, within I stay. Slowly drifting away underwater space filled days with endless abstract marvel. Snowflakes shine like diamond stars in the sun; heaven sent spun down each, and everyone floating slowly down finding its trace rest. Some falling freely on my head and face much shaken laughter memories it stays. I'm stuck here in between, within I stay. There he lies in a stall with his mother and Joseph; in the morning all gather Christ's Nativity here in awe wonder. I dream a dream stuck in a Christmas globe. My feet can't touch the ground's shimmering cloak. I'm slowly soul drifting, drifting away. I'm stuck here in between, within I stay. 11/25/2019

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Date: 12/28/2019 2:07:00 AM
Eve this was beautiful congrats my friend!;)
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Date: 12/26/2019 10:04:00 AM
Nicely done Eve, with a very original metaphor! Wishing you and yours a sweet and blessed 2020.
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Date: 12/17/2019 12:39:00 PM
- Sorry late response ... Congratulations on your winning poem, Eve :) - Christmas is approaching ... and I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/13/2019 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my friend. This was wonderful.
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Date: 12/13/2019 4:46:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Bobby's Christmas Globe contest, Eve - keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 12/13/2019 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations Eve on your first place win!
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:11:00 PM
Eve congrats on a beautiful win!;)
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Date: 12/12/2019 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve! Clever to use a nativity scene!
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:33:00 PM
I have a Nativity snow globe sitting by me that is what gave me the idea..
Date: 12/12/2019 6:54:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Eve
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Date: 12/12/2019 6:40:00 PM
Drifting away within the globe! A beautiful image and sentiment, richly deserving of your win in the contest, Eve. Congrats and Merry Xmas! :) Gershon Or
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Date: 11/29/2019 1:35:00 PM
This is kinda how I felt when I lost my daughter. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/25/2019 4:44:00 PM
Hi Eve well done. A wonderful poem. I will be back to congratulate. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/25/2019 1:54:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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