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Struggling, Never Surrendering

Oh, shattered and broken after my husband's accidental death! My life was darkness and tears, I was in a pit of pain with high walls, and no hope- I lost my job and was collecting- welfare humiliated- I moved back home. He died way too soon after the babies death! I wanted to be strong. I looked deep into my soul, and found nothing- even wished to end my life- to break free of the imprisonment. I wanted to cast off the cloak of death! Oh, just to end the captivity! And I dreamt of the sea, that blue chasm, always struggling, never surrendering seeking its path. And I listened and found deep inside of me a little bird singing. And she was growing stronger. Her song mighty, full of hope and courage. Then, one day she broke free! A broken wing- did not hold her back and she just flew and flew- _________________________ April 19, 2017 Free Verse/Struggling, Never Surrendering Copyright Protected, ID 893842 Broken Wing Frank Herrera

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Date: 4/20/2017 7:41:00 PM
to show such pain and the struggle to deal with it in a poem is to reveal a strength and beauty in the soul
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Date: 4/20/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank You....Love this not close too broke...
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Date: 4/19/2017 7:04:00 PM
This is a prime example of the power of poetry to re-purpose our purpose in response to pain and I applaud you for bouncing back. 7+
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Date: 4/19/2017 5:25:00 PM
My friend, the sadness is just crying from your pen today. I have read three from you and in each you are pouring your heart out on the page, touching mine deeply.
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