Stripping Passion of Feelings

Long I hoarded my priceless treasure of silver
coins hidden from her unsuspecting glance,
this alloy of glittering metals was a curse;
I kept it guarded as gold in a greedy manner.

If the daintiest daisy is plucked to guess the other
lover's thought, I pull off the petals of this blue rose
to undo all the delusive images embellished in prose;
isn't truth a spring from which gushes only pure water?

Once lips are kissed, a sworn promise is forever sealed;
I forfeited mine by giving her less and receiving more,
selfish heart: your guilt is the palpable beat of my sad
regret stripping passion of feelings that no longer implore. 

Other women's eyes with that pretty shade of light blue won't 
be a strong attraction to me: yours never fades into any sunset.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:27 PM
you soften and lighten my heart with this superb sonnet, andrew!..huggs
A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Never read a sonnet like this. thank you for sharing
Whatley Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 10:57 AM
I can't quite grasp the title, but I really do like the transformation of silver into gold. Great imagery analogy Andrew.
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