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Strip Mall Surprise

We began to see the first sign of Strip Malls toward the end of World War Two. In fact I remember something of a barbed wire fence I used to peer through. Wilmington, North Carolina 1945. Just a theater, grocery and truck stop. But behind those walls of new laid brick and mortar was a dare of dares, no one can top. A barb wire fence built to keep someone in. GERMANS ! (I was to sworn to secrecy) Billy Fenster caught me peeping around the corner to get a look at what I was not supposed to see. Look at Mr. Scaredy he said, and with a snide look on his face, “I d-double dare you to go to the fence painted red.” Siddling along the brick like a crab doing the moon walk I stayed in the shadow feeling light in my head. Kommen zie hier, I heard. Seeing enough Don Winslow movies, I knew what he meant. I walked but nothing did I utter. Through the metal he handed me a baseball. In large letters he had scrawled “Gruber” I saluted and he returning smiled and needed no speaking. I returned to Billy with my chest in elation. And the baseball is still in my possession. © Jun 12 2010 Charles Henderson

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Date: 7/8/2010 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Frank Herrera's contest "Images". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 2:03:00 AM
Wonderful story, Charles. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lanie
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Charles! Luv, andrea
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:38:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Frank’s contest. May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:36:00 AM
This story comes alive through your words. I really like the ending. Congratulations on your third place finish in the Images contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:32:00 AM
I remember these beginningsof the malls, but your memories of a gift from so called enemy is delightful. Congratulations on your winning poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:27:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in the Images contest with this amazing write so wonderful .. enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation still.. AlohA..
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Date: 6/15/2010 9:07:00 AM
I knew someone who was charged with guarding German prisoners during the war. Interesting write with wonderful ending! Dan C
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:49:00 AM
Interesting fact about your life...If this is for a contest, good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:16:00 PM
I literally had chills reading this, Charles--the good kind partnered with a wide smile--wow! This is one amazing story that I truly enjoyed reading--definitely inspiring! ^_^ --nikko :)
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