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The quiver of ALL ... open, closed, one dimensional, vibrating,
larger scales appear as the particle norm, (antiphon?) ...
charge, mass, gravitons affect quantum states of matter,
super-symmetry between bosons, fermions, (a weighty throb) -
quantum fields connected ... influenced ... shaken, but still ...
not clearly defined in all events - not channeled to unification ...
but it MUST, somehow ... it's there ... trembling, (like a horror),
one of the weakest forces in all of the physical universe, yet ...
far beyond grasp, our claws raking deep the flesh of wonder -
one day we'll laugh at its simplicity, that day ... God. Will. Weep.
~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Brian's Select B, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
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