Strings

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The quiver of ALL ... open, closed, one dimensional, vibrating, larger scales appear as the particle norm, (antiphon?) ... charge, mass, gravitons affect quantum states of matter, super-symmetry between bosons, fermions, (a weighty throb) - quantum fields connected ... influenced ... shaken, but still ... not clearly defined in all events - not channeled to unification ... but it MUST, somehow ... it's there ... trembling, (like a horror), one of the weakest forces in all of the physical universe, yet ... far beyond grasp, our claws raking deep the flesh of wonder - one day we'll laugh at its simplicity, that day ... God. Will. Weep. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Brian's Select B, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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John Watt

Date: 6/10/2020 7:21:00 PM

When poetry meets science... another brilliant write, Bard. Such a depth of creativity ~ John

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:24:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, John - I'm so pleased you liked my poem ... this one is special to me, and I appreciate the wonderful comments, and your taking the time. Blessings to you, My Friend! :o)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/10/2020 2:32:00 PM

Such a powerful tale woven with ntricate imaginations that leave multiple loops of interpretations. This is amazing Greg!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:24:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, Aditi! :o) <3

Charles Messina

Date: 6/10/2020 6:08:00 AM

Love this!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/12/2020 1:23:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie! :o)