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I walked alone Down a street of shattered dreams Paved with shards of rainbow colored glass So many broken people I sadly pass Betty and Bob up ahead Looking lonely and partially dead How did they ever end up here From Betty's eyes drop salty tears More shards of rainbow colored glass As all the years they quickly pass Wanting a son or baby girl The completion of their desired world Lining the street Houses devoid of heat These lost people I long to meet Dark eyes peer out as I pass Watching as I walk on their broken glass On one of the porches Sits Delta Dawn She still has that flower on Her dreams like her lover are sadly gone On another porch sits lonely Dan With a loaded gun in his hand He can't seem to face this life's demands He has always felt like half a man For some it seems easier to stay in this place No new disappointments to face Hearts no longer keeping pace Darkened eyes Former light no trace I look to Heaven I say a prayer Tell me God are you there If you are do you even care I feel so much sadness everywhere In a moment I feel an angel kiss I could not ask for more than this The rainbow glass begins to meld As all God's beauty is beheld From the street There Glows a light All color joins becoming white The ultimate dream is realized Joy restored to tired eyes I walk down a street paved in light A place where there are happy sights Bob and Betty no more tears Happy that they made it here Dan now finally satisfied He know the truth the Devil lied He feels accepted at last No longer ruled by a broken past Delta Dawn and lover walk hand in hand A life with color no longer bland On each side Pretty houses line This street this place that is divine A place broken dreams go to be fixed Where together with God's love they are fully mixed A place for dreamers To dream special dreams From dark to color their minds will shift As through God's spirit They receive his gifts

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Date: 1/28/2014 10:13:00 AM
I will say it again. I can see that the hand of God pushes your pen. You write well. I can feel how blessed you are every time I read your poetry.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/28/2014 8:04:00 PM
I thank him daily. So glad you appreciate my work.
Date: 6/8/2013 5:46:00 PM
Rick, this is splendid! May those in despair be lucky enough to experience an angel's kiss....wonderful write and message! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2013 5:52:00 PM
Thanks again Cecilia, you are good for my ego! Hugs Rick
Date: 6/5/2013 1:46:00 PM
Hey Rick. You are a man of integrity. It is obvious when one reads your work. Always a fan...Caleb
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2013 5:32:00 PM
What a nice thing to say Caleb, I appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 6/4/2013 12:01:00 AM
A beautiful theme carried through out... the way people are described as rainbow colored glass makes me feel like there is much more to people than just random strangers walking by... nice 360! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2013 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Tim, so glad you liked this one. I had written a version of this one and it didn't post so lost the one I started with. The first two lines I remembered let me to this conclusion.
Date: 6/3/2013 4:15:00 AM
Hi Richard! I read this in the stages it was in before completion and now this beauty! Lovely! You have such an enchanting way with words. One of my fav poets. :) Do you know the song Give Them all To Jesus? ....shattered dreams, wounded hearts, and broken toys...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2013 6:04:00 AM
I am not familiar with the song, I will look it up.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2013 6:04:00 AM
Thanks as well for your always thoughtful words
Date: 6/3/2013 12:44:00 AM
Hi! This is stunning. I sometime wonder whether God has left all of us when I hear news on destruction, abuse, rape, murder, war etc. Our ears are full of these. But as you say, God has marvelous ways of answering our prayers. This is one of God's work. love and hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2013 6:09:00 AM
When God gave us free will he tied his own hands. Sadly that results in consequences we sadly witness each and every day. People who become part of his Kingdom are how he chooses to connect with the world. We are his contact point and instrument of his Love.
Date: 6/2/2013 7:07:00 PM
I'm late in appreciating your work on this epic poem. I am really impressed with where it is now. If this is only a work in progress, heaven help us who might come up against your work in contests. Admiration and respect from this corner..... Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2013 6:10:00 AM
Thanks so much John, you are most kind.
Date: 6/2/2013 6:31:00 PM
such a romantic, thanks so much for catching my labeling error on my latest verse, I really appreciate it. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2013 6:11:00 AM
No worries.
Date: 6/2/2013 2:46:00 PM
An awesome write Richard, I enjoyed the read, very creative. ~ Caryl
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 4:47:00 PM
Thanks Caryl
Date: 6/2/2013 1:46:00 PM
Sadly I know all to well the streets of shattered dreams.You nailed it with this one.Have a good rest of sunday.Love Colleen
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Colleen Bono
Date: 6/2/2013 4:55:00 PM
that would be a nice journey.thanks
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 4:45:00 PM
You as well, I hope you come to experience the latter part of the poem.
Date: 6/2/2013 12:33:00 PM
Well worth waiting for, Richard. Bravo, my friend. You've got it. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Licia, I have tweaked it a bit more.
Date: 6/2/2013 11:56:00 AM
I'm following this one closely as you're working on it and it just becomes betterer and betterer. Whatever you do, please don't change "no new disappointments to face". I can't wait for your final rendition. Good luck, Richard. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:34:00 PM
I left the line in.
Date: 6/2/2013 11:19:00 AM
can hardly wait to see how this goes.. so far, so good; i like the progression of your thoughts and the style!...shine on!..:) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I hope you enjoy the final version.
Date: 6/2/2013 11:14:00 AM
Sounds like its gonna be a good one.Have a great sunday.take care.Love Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:35:00 PM
Thanks for being the first again. Hugs Rick
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Colleen Bono
Date: 6/2/2013 11:14:00 AM
P.S.you know.1st one

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