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Street 18

Shiny silver bullet opens to reveal pompous red cream; cream that is spread like hot melting wax upon a plump young canvas; A canvas that must walk the streets at night to be viewed for money.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/13/2009 2:22:00 PM
I like the form that you chose for this. Very nice! Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 8/11/2009 2:02:00 PM
Interesting form, you did well, congratulations in placing in Matts contest. Trudy
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Date: 8/11/2009 8:24:00 AM
Provocative and deep....well done, Jessica! Congratulations on placing this poem in Matt's contest....quite unique the style, and excellent images...! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/10/2009 11:25:00 PM
Congrats on placing in Matt's contest, MJ
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Date: 7/31/2009 8:45:00 AM
Super poem Jessica, a clever write if i may say so>>James
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Date: 7/14/2009 3:05:00 AM
this is great Jessica, I like that I had to get to the last verse to realize what the poem was about, and then I read it again.
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