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Fair dancing maidens With jingling silver anklets Rushing down the hills
Placed First A Strand's (1068) Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/3/2022 6:26:00 AM
WoW! Valsa, This is lovely. You painted a delightful picture with words. Congratulations on your win. PS, in your most recent Haiku, change the title to lower case letters. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 3/3/2022 8:46:00 AM
Thanks a lot Alexis for your suggestion for correction of the title of my haiku ! I did as suggested ! Greatly appreciate your sincerity. Thanks once more !
Date: 2/12/2022 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Valsa, enjoyed . Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/8/2022 8:25:00 PM
Ooh! This is goooooooood! A FAVE for me, me... and a winner in the contest for sure, methinks... Maidens streaming; suitors dreaming... An 'aha! moment' here. ~ Lost in reverie, gw
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Date: 2/8/2022 7:53:00 PM
Beautiful comparison and image. Great haiku. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/8/2022 4:54:00 PM
Valsa I so miss dancing, the days fall shorter and I'm slower...you bring memories, good luck!
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Date: 2/8/2022 3:15:00 PM
Oh so Mystifying. You painted a gorgeous imagery with this stunning Haiku. I feel like I am looking at a masterpiece on the wall. Brevity at its best. Congratulations dear friend.
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Date: 2/7/2022 5:13:00 PM
I sense they feel purposeful in their work and from a different view, playful and looking forward to washing in the stream. I got two for the price of one with this Haiku, Valsa. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Bill
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Date: 2/7/2022 2:58:00 PM
Enchanting visual, so cinematic Valsa.
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Date: 2/7/2022 12:56:00 PM
I've seen them, in colors and traditional regalia, courtesy of Bollywood. Nonurban people have so much color, so much vivacity ... Naturally. Shalom shalOm dear sis
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Date: 2/7/2022 10:10:00 AM
A tribute to Lata Mangeshikar? Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 2/7/2022 6:22:00 AM
Great imagery. Can picture the girl with the music.
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Date: 2/7/2022 8:00:00 AM
These girls have jingling anklets on their feet ! Thank you much dear poet friend !
Date: 2/7/2022 5:44:00 AM
This is a lovely depiction: Valsa, an excellent portrayal of Mother Nature's myriad streams that may be found anywhere.
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Date: 2/7/2022 7:59:00 AM
The streams jump down the mountains dancing to their own tune.... It is a lovely sight. Thanks a lot dear Lasaad !
Date: 2/7/2022 4:59:00 AM
Dynamic imagery, Valsa. I see them dancing as they fall.
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Date: 2/7/2022 5:06:00 AM
Thanks a lot Vijay !
Date: 2/7/2022 3:24:00 AM
a great description of Mother Natures dancers......beautifully written Valsa
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Date: 2/7/2022 4:27:00 AM
Indeed they are dancers. Thanks a lot John !
Date: 2/7/2022 2:37:00 AM
Lovely image Valsa, seen many like that around the ring of kerry, streams everywhere. Hope you had a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 2/7/2022 4:27:00 AM
Love the sound of gurgling streams . Thank you so much Tom.