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"The bubbling brook doth leap when I come by . . . " Jones Very, Poet, 1813-1880 _____________________________________________ It was morning and peaceful by the flowing stream and green- The pines, spruce and foliage hung in hues bright, and ferns and mossy rocks were sweet delight; it was such a beautiful nature scene. I walked a bubbly stream calm and serene, it was lovely in the soft dappled light; hidden in shade a flock of birds took flight. Around a bend- a roar came quite unforeseen, oh, I came upon a falls cascading; a dream- it was wonderful, soothing and so cool, with gleam- I waded in the falling water pool, and all about birds were serenading; I do not want to count the moments of this day, but dawn is calling and my dream has faded away. ________________________________ September 14, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Stream Copyright Protected, ID 19-1180-992-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Picturesque Rhyme sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 9/28/2019 10:08:00 PM
You took us all there with your beautiful write! Lonna
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Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2019 12:14:00 AM
Lonna, thanks so much for the beautiful !
Date: 9/26/2019 8:28:00 PM
I waded in the falling water pool ... Oh, l feel the touch ... Wonderful, Dear Heart ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
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Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2019 2:26:00 PM
Provide thanks for the great comment and congratulations!
Date: 9/26/2019 2:25:00 PM
This is my favorite! What a lovely image you gave me of walking along a path and discovering the waterfall...Love. xoxox
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2019 5:14:00 PM
Jeanne thanks for the lovely comment!
Date: 9/26/2019 7:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, D.H. :) - A truly amazing picture Eve chose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2019 10:13:00 AM
Anne-Lise thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations!
Date: 9/26/2019 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations on this lovely beauty winning First Place Constance! I adored this contest and reading all the beautiful entries Kudos! xxoo : )
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2019 10:11:00 AM
Connie thank you for the lovely and the congratulations!
Date: 9/25/2019 10:58:00 PM
Love your imagery and the emotions, Dear Heart , congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2019 10:10:00 AM
Eve thank you so much for the love and congratulations!
Date: 9/15/2019 1:25:00 PM
- Beautifully described, D.H. - Best wishes in the contest ... a top winning poem - I struggle to rhyme in English ... but has posted one anyway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2019 4:28:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the beautiful and for the compliment
Date: 9/15/2019 2:10:00 AM
You truly describes ths picture perfectly ! If I did see it I could have seen it in my mind!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:56:00 PM
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Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2019 8:36:00 AM
Brenda, thank you that is the absolutely best compliment a poet could ever receive.

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