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A gent in a tailored suit, sat by me and said, I saw the ripest strawberries, fruit of ruby red poured over a dish of vanilla ice cream I pinched myself, could this be a dream? He shook his head and whispered "You are a pearl of a girl, Would you care to dare come with me, for a swirl?" The sun was blaring in my eyes and down upon us I doffed my sun hat, a warm sultry day, no need to fuss No use resisting such enticing fun Lapping away and dripping on my tongue We were lost in that dream, a delicious swoon A strawberry delight made for two on a hot afternoon!
6/25/22

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Date: 1/16/2024 7:48:00 AM
Very creative wryte, Ayana, I could build myself to be the character In the poem, Excellante, Panagiota
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Date: 7/16/2022 10:45:00 PM
Very sensual poem. I Am Ayana.
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Date: 7/6/2022 7:11:00 AM
Very enticing imagery, Anaya. Now I need to put DQ in my plans for today. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/6/2022 11:54:00 AM
Hi Bill, I never knew how much I love strawberry ice cream. It's summertime, enjoy it my friend!
Date: 7/5/2022 6:51:00 PM
What a delightful afternoon Anaya, delicious strawberries and ice cream with a gent straight out of your dreams. Poem a winner for sure… Belle
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/6/2022 11:52:00 AM
Belle it's nice to hear from you, the way we reach out to each other and mutually support has taught me so about the power of the human heart and soul! Thank you!
Date: 7/1/2022 9:00:00 PM
What a fun poem! I scream ice cream! July is National Ice Cream Month :)
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/2/2022 10:46:00 PM
Perfect!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/2/2022 7:34:00 PM
Oh, I should do something, ah, I know, I'll make it a tribute then! My picture shall welcome July and Ice cream! Thanks, Mark!
Date: 6/29/2022 11:19:00 AM
Sweet! Strawberry season here in Minnesota, Anaya! Dreamsickle poem!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/29/2022 2:30:00 PM
I have not Anaya, but I do have family hour away in Santa Monica, will ask them!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/29/2022 11:35:00 AM
Hi James, I checked out the strawberry farms "Luneyberries" caught my attention. I like the newly minted word "dreamsickle" Have you been to the strawberry fields outside of Oxnard? That's quite a sight!
Date: 6/28/2022 8:36:00 PM
Very nice rhyme, Ayana, and a susual poem.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 7/17/2022 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Mike
Date: 6/27/2022 6:28:00 PM
Light and jaunty and in excellent taste! A great entry, Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/28/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, dear Robert. You are very kind.
Date: 6/26/2022 8:59:00 PM
Anaya, you have approached the subject in an altogether different way ! I just loved your take on this stawberry delight . Win big, dear friend !
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Date: 6/27/2022 4:53:00 PM
Aw, so glad you enjoyed it, thank you. I treasure your opinion. Valsa have a great day!
Date: 6/26/2022 12:38:00 PM
This is a sweet delight. So dreamy.
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Date: 6/27/2022 4:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, summer is great and so is ice cream!
Date: 6/26/2022 12:28:00 PM
Oh, what a delightful, sweet dream! Much enjoyed the sweet tone blended with romance. Best to you for a TOP win, Anaya.
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Date: 6/27/2022 4:51:00 PM
Most fun for me. Thank you for enjoying and for your precious opinion Vijay!
Date: 6/26/2022 2:27:00 AM
Summery and delightful Anaya…yes please!! Debx
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/27/2022 4:48:00 PM
Hi Deb, let's get some! Thanks for your lovely visit.
Date: 6/26/2022 2:02:00 AM
Yes truly delightful with Victor i agree, the poetry rhythm and rhyme superb.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/27/2022 4:46:00 PM
Thank you, harry, I am delighted that you enjoyed the rhyme. Thank you for your time and visit. ~Anaya
Date: 6/25/2022 11:12:00 PM
A delightful poem. Makes one's mouth water.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/27/2022 8:42:00 AM
I'm longing for some strawberry ice cream, myself. Victor, I am happy you found it delightful!
Date: 6/25/2022 10:44:00 PM
A good poem. Well done.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 6/26/2022 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette, I appreciate it!

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