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I was young when I fell in love With a blue eyed singer of songs. I had no talents to speak of, But she was a righter of wrongs. As each year came I became less In her thoughts and less in her life. I wasn't much and I confess There was no chance she'd be my wife. As in her songs, I went to war - I'd be a hero with medals. Maybe even earn the Big Star, And I'd come home to rose petals. I lie here now, my face in sand, With the tears running down my face. I am a stranger in this land - They aim to kill me in this place. I shiver with each tear that falls, And tells me life has soured. I found that when my duty calls, I have answered as a coward. No thoughts of love or blue eyed girls Can enter my brain past the fear. Bullets pass my head in swirls - All I can muster is a tear I hope to die a painless death, I'll take cowardice to the grave. I did not know with each deep breath That my life was not one to save. I was young when I fell in love - At the time I thought it was daft Now the bullets whine just above, I dried the tears, stood up and laughed. November 7, 2016 Foe Contest Creep

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Date: 12/1/2016 2:56:00 PM
Well-done congrats x
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Date: 12/1/2016 8:27:00 AM
Hi Larry, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the"Creep" contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/1/2016 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Alexis...and my congratulations to you on your win as well. Yours was exceptionally emotional and well written!!..Larry
Date: 11/7/2016 11:37:00 PM
Thought provoking. Shows how easily a casualty of love can become a casualty of war.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/30/2016 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Keith!
Date: 11/7/2016 11:10:00 PM
I love this poem. It does what any good piece of writing should do, make the reader try to walk in the writers shoes.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/30/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thanks, Christy!!

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