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** For Billie Holiday & Abel Meeropol **

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strange fruit -

in a dream -
Mississippi, the 50's
lone hike on a sweltry spring-tide day
rolling fields of cotton and wheat
cauliflower clouds like lazy old men
creeping across a buttery haze …
as I walk, I tickle the tops of the grasses
hands open, palms down
blessing them
like mischievous children …

strolling a rise
in no hurry but oddly compelled
ball cap and short sleeves
skin rosy from the midday shine -
naked, dazzling sun, yet …
an odd trepidation as I round the hilltop -
below is a peach grove
in glorious, pregnant bloom
such strange fruit, these southern trees bear
burnished, dark, twisted
slowly spinning in the cruel heat -
and flies …

realization
hits me like a fist
and I retch into the beautiful
blossoms at my knees
turning away in horror and shame
for my skin is white -
the fetor, overwhelming
and he...
was but a boy.

~ For Billie Holiday and Abel Meeropol ~






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Early January 2019 Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 1/6/2019 7:35:00 PM
A sad gutwrenching chill from reading this masterfully written piece Greg. Emotional horror portrayed vividly with your pen. I see why it is at the top! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/9/2019 4:54:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Connie, and I'm so glad you liked this one ... it is very important to me. Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 1/6/2019 3:50:00 PM
Wow! Absolutely spell-binding. A masterpiece, redolent of the time, the circumstances, the scene you set. This had my palms sweating, as well as the back of my knees... A FAVE. Bravo! Best wishes, admiringly ~ Gershon
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/9/2019 4:53:00 AM
Oh, I'm so happy you liked this piece, Gershon, as I always get apprehensive about these "touchy" subjects, and try to be sensitive but also make an impact ... I don't always succeed. Many thanks to you, my friend! :-)
Date: 1/6/2019 3:48:00 PM
Thank You for this! I have been haunted for years, by Billie Holiday's song, 'Strange Fruit' - Hard to Believe the level man's inhumanity to man can sink to. Excellent, and sensitively written!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/9/2019 4:51:00 AM
That's so kind of you to say, Andrew, and I so appreciate your heartfelt comments, and mention of Billie, (who is a sort of hero of mine, for personal reasons) ... that song affected me deeply, and still does. Abel Meeropol wrote it, but she brought it to life, and she had a very similar experience while on tour with her band in the south, (and she nearly was lynched herself). Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 1/4/2019 11:54:00 AM
Spectacular chilling piece Greg. Wow <3 Best for a win! xomo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/9/2019 4:47:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Maureen - I so appreciate it! :-)
Date: 1/3/2019 10:04:00 AM
Took me a few few reads to get this one, but the meaning is loud and clear, excellent write Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/9/2019 4:47:00 AM
Thank you John - this is why kind and honest feedback is so important - please don't ever hesitate, my friend! :-)
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/3/2019 10:34:00 PM
Reads better now, was as I thought!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/3/2019 8:29:00 PM
Thanks, my friend ... I added a line to (hopefully) clarify it a bit, John.
Date: 1/3/2019 10:03:00 AM
Chilling! But so well written as you can do.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/3/2019 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunlite ... blessings. <3
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