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Who Was the Falling Man from 9/11? - Falling Man Identity Revealed

* To all those who lost their lives on September 11, 2001 * azure ... sublime and cloudless and bright I watched the birds the strange, colorful birds flitting in the sun of a perfect, pristine morning taking to the sky in flight - soaring, drifting, falling, falling ... falling odd, they had no feathers no wings to press against that glorious September air but beautiful in their way in their deadly, dancing descent until the screams were close enough to hear and the sickening thud of flesh ... meeting pavement. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice 10, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 10/10/2020 3:38:00 AM
What a great poem my friend. True, such was an epic tragedy and one I will never forget. Senseless murder of so many... Also shown was the courage, bravery, empathy, patriotism and steadfastness of so many during and afterwards.
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Date: 9/20/2020 3:02:00 PM
by the way. You get Netflix? Watch REMEMBER ME. OMG, it's such an amazing movie and if you don't know about it, the tower picture you showed here figures into it.
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Date: 9/17/2020 11:58:00 AM
Sad one..which evokes tears in readers eyes..:-( Keep writing and keep inspiring dear Gregory sir..Take care.Warm regards from Deepa:-)
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Date: 9/17/2020 7:22:00 AM
A great tribute to those who desperately tried to learn how to fly on that beautiful day. Respect!
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Date: 9/16/2020 9:51:00 PM
wow I LOVE this, Greg. Congrats on a very well deserved win. A FAVE
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Date: 9/15/2020 1:51:00 PM
Wow! Quite the poe-tic, a bit hitchcockian too!
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Date: 9/15/2020 8:46:00 AM
...images hard to put words to, hard to read when you do. Heart rendering. xomo
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