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Stormy As Words' Venom Premiere Contest Winner

Beneath kohl sky, the war of words rattles As fierce lightning of his voice, my thunderous replies Pour a lethal elixir, its venom malignant Demanding a power struggle between forces, On one tearing night which assaults the senses: How whipping air deepens a rugged course Where darkness gathers heightened energy; Vicious as the gnaws of a charged torrent. I saunter out to clear an overcast mind, Breathing in the rain, the moist vapor While my fingers raise high in soulful appeal Until a dot of a star enters into my body... Gradually, the storm passes by, as if Nothing on the byway stirs a gory hour; That in pure clarity, I open the kitchen door And maybe, through divine intervention, He embraces me in the middle of his vulnerability. Perfect Storm Contest ---for Craig Cornish 10/4/2017

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Date: 10/9/2017 1:03:00 PM
A huge congrats my lovely dear friend. My fave too. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:15:00 AM
Many congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2017 12:48:00 AM
Gorgeous write and so intelligently crafted, Nette - loved it! Blessings and congrats, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 10/6/2017 10:52:00 PM
I love your take on this contest theme, Nette. You did an amazing job with this. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/6/2017 10:03:00 PM
Congrats Nette on a number 1 win, in Craig's contest, very worthy winner!
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:46:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your Trophy win for this outstanding and metaphorical write. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:16:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement. You really thought outside the box on this one, Nette.
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Date: 10/6/2017 6:45:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your trophy win with this emotional write ~
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Date: 10/6/2017 5:50:00 PM
Big congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - blessings and hugs! :-) <3
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Date: 10/6/2017 2:51:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Nette!
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Date: 10/5/2017 10:22:00 AM
A deep emotive write Nette..
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Date: 10/4/2017 3:53:00 PM
The last line adds another layer of emotion. An impressive piece. Hugs and thanks for your visit.
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Date: 10/4/2017 2:52:00 PM
A dynamo of an analogy! Your human word-colors describe the spirit of one woman's soul in very compelling ways. I praise you!
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Date: 10/4/2017 2:43:00 PM
A storm happens to send a rainbow after the fury. The last stanza is cathartic; in its entirety-- a brilliant poem full of passion and tenderness!
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Date: 10/4/2017 2:29:00 PM
- A really stormy poem, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:56:00 PM
This poem is articulate, well written as always!
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:45:00 PM
Very powerful, Nette, You words clearly conjure the storm! Good Luck
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Date: 10/4/2017 10:30:00 AM
hi nette: I am in awe of your unique poetic words.as always!
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