Premiere Contest WinnerStormy As Words' Venom

Beneath kohl sky,  the war of words rattles
As fierce lightning of his voice, my thunderous replies
Pour a lethal elixir,  its venom malignant
Demanding a  power struggle between forces,
On one tearing night which assaults the senses:
How whipping air deepens a rugged course 
Where darkness gathers heightened energy;
Vicious as the gnaws of a charged torrent.

I saunter out to clear an overcast mind,
Breathing in the rain, the moist vapor
While my fingers raise high in  soulful appeal
Until a dot of a star enters into my body...
Gradually, the storm passes by, as if
Nothing on the byway stirs a gory hour;
That in pure clarity, I open the kitchen door
And  maybe, through divine intervention,
He embraces me in the middle of his vulnerability.


Perfect Storm Contest ---for Craig Cornish
10/4/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Devnath  Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:03 PM
A huge congrats my lovely dear friend. My fave too. Loved always, bl
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 3:15 AM
Many congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 12:48 AM
Gorgeous write and so intelligently crafted, Nette - loved it! Blessings and congrats, my friend! :-) <3
Teagan Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 10:52 PM
I love your take on this contest theme, Nette. You did an amazing job with this. Congratulations on your win!
Hamilton Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 10:03 PM
Congrats Nette on a number 1 win, in Craig's contest, very worthy winner!
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Nette, congratulations on your Trophy win for this outstanding and metaphorical write. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Congrats on your top placement. You really thought outside the box on this one, Nette.
La France Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Nette, congratulations on your trophy win with this emotional write ~
Barden Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Big congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - blessings and hugs! :-) <3
Cozart Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Congrats on your top win, Nette!
One Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 10:22 AM
A deep emotive write Nette..
Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 3:53 PM
The last line adds another layer of emotion. An impressive piece. Hugs and thanks for your visit.
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 2:29 PM
- A really stormy poem, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:56 PM
This poem is articulate, well written as always!
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Very powerful, Nette, You words clearly conjure the storm! Good Luck
Sergi Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 10:30 AM
hi nette: I am in awe of your unique poetic words.as always!
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