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The bitter biting wind howls around my face I’m out on the moors: such a desolate place Dark clouds are gathering straight ahead Wish I was at home safe in my bed Streaks of golden lightning fill up the sky Vivid flashes of white flash in my eye Thunder claps deafen me, I cover my ears Not been in a storm like this for many many years Lightning forks fill me with fascination I wait for the next one with great anticipation Lighting up the sky like a massive floodlight Thunder and lightning such a pure delight I shelter safely by the gnarled oak tree Its wizened old branches shielding me Rain teems down but I am safe and dry I shelter safely until the storm passes by Written for Shadow Hamilton’s Storms Contest 06-29-14 ~awarded 3rd place~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/7/2014 12:56:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Jan!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2014 1:02:00 PM
thanks for dropping by Arlene. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2014 12:31:00 PM
Stormy write Jan ! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 7/3/2014 4:31:00 PM
thanks for the lovely comment Dr Sharma. Hugs jan x
Date: 7/3/2014 9:39:00 AM
Loved it Jan congrats ...Seren
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Date: 7/3/2014 4:30:00 PM
Many thanks for dropping by Seren. hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2014 9:37:00 AM
Congrats on the win. Huddling under a tree? Oh Oh... Loved it.
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Date: 7/3/2014 4:30:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Carol.Hugs jan x
Date: 7/2/2014 9:26:00 AM
Great imagery - the moors have always been a good setting. Well done! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Roy and congrats again on your wonderful poem. jan x
Date: 7/2/2014 7:05:00 AM
Excellent stormy write, Jan. Like the metaphor of the strong oak tree being a source of shelter and safety. Congrats on a merited win. // paul [ ps...in real life stay away from trees when thunderbolts strike!!!]
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Date: 7/2/2014 7:45:00 AM
thanks for the lovely comment and advice Paul - sheltering under the tree - purely poetic licence LOL. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/2/2014 5:11:00 AM
Great to be protected by the Oak..This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 7/2/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Sara. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 7/2/2014 12:19:00 AM
Nice rhyme on storm and finding safety in the good old oak tree. Congrats Jan for the win. Mohan
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:05:00 AM
thanks for the lovely comment Mohan. Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/1/2014 8:19:00 PM
Hey how did I miss this one! Oh jan grats on your storm and win :) terrific :)!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/2/2014 2:04:00 AM
thanks Casarah for the lovely comment. Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/1/2014 7:50:00 PM
Hi Jan, congratulations on a wonderful write and great win! Warmest regards.
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:04:00 AM
thanks for the lovely comment Pandita. jan x
Date: 7/1/2014 6:16:00 PM
full of vivid images Jan congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2014 6:19:00 PM
WOW thank you so much Shadow I am DELIGHTED you liked my poem and gave it such a wonderful place. Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Date: 6/29/2014 7:08:00 AM
A magnificent storm Jan..I like how you are sheltered at the end...hugs Tim
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2014 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by with your lovely comment. Hugs as ever Jan xx

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