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All day long earth flirted with the sullen atmosphere, twirling her floral skirts, tossing her hair like Guinevere. Her eyelids all aflutter, winking -- she is a dangerous coquette -- the air is close and heavy, all creation pants and sweats . . . darkness falls. Tired of her teasing, earth turns her head to sleep, but the atmosphere feels slighted, a storm of anger in him leaps, his fascination kindled by the earth's seductive wiles. In the blackness lightning flashes in a vivid, crooked smile. He will never be mistreated by a flirtatious, foolish girl; his thwarted passion heightens, a revolting, vicious swirl. There is violence on the planet, the sky bows her head and weeps as the thunder roars like cannons and thick winds, twistedly, sweep. Daylight finds earth ravished, her floral skirts scattered, in shreds, but the atmosphere has lightened; the guilty storm has fled. Faye Lanham Gibson Copyright, June 27, 2014

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Date: 7/7/2014 12:58:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Faye!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/3/2014 12:03:00 PM
Very wonderful write Faye ! Worthy of great win,, big congrats !
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Date: 7/2/2014 9:59:00 PM
A vividly enthralling personification, capturing the very essence of storms . Thank you for sharing, Faye. bfn Your friend in poetry, Lainie
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Date: 7/2/2014 9:33:00 AM
Love the personification... Well done! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2014 7:27:00 AM
Metaphorically speaking this is one of the very best entries that I have read. Enjoyed it immensely. This was a storm caused through frustration...no doubt about it!:) Congrats on a deserved win, Faye. // paul
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/6/2014 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Your comments are very meaningful.
Date: 7/2/2014 4:33:00 AM
Love the five lines on the first hahaha you have me smiling ...:) this the only storm I read so far with a touch of laughter..:) great write kudos!
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:01:00 AM
a beautiful play between earth and storm through your rhyme, Faye. Congrats on the fine win. Mohan
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:48:00 PM
What an image, great to see this one on the winners list :) happy hugs :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:29:00 PM
such passion makes this a great read Faye congrats on 4th place
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/6/2014 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow, for the placement on your contest.
Date: 6/28/2014 1:57:00 PM
A powerful metaphor there...enjoyed reading.
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Date: 6/28/2014 12:55:00 AM
There is always peace after the storms, Faye
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Date: 6/27/2014 5:44:00 PM
a downpour of strong lines with an ending that calms.. wonderful, faye!.. huggs
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