Storms

All day long earth flirted with the sullen atmosphere,
twirling her floral skirts, tossing her hair like Guinevere.
Her eyelids all aflutter, winking -- she is a dangerous coquette --
the air is close and heavy, all creation pants and sweats . . .
darkness falls. Tired of her teasing, earth turns her head to sleep,
but the atmosphere feels slighted, a storm of anger in him leaps,
his fascination kindled by the earth's seductive wiles.
In the blackness lightning flashes in a vivid, crooked smile.
He will never be mistreated by a flirtatious, foolish girl;
his thwarted passion heightens, a revolting, vicious swirl.
There is violence on the planet, the sky bows her head and weeps
as the thunder roars like cannons and thick winds, twistedly, sweep.
Daylight finds earth ravished, her floral skirts scattered, in shreds,
but the atmosphere has lightened; the guilty storm has fled.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, June 27, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Congrats on a great win, Faye!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Very wonderful write Faye ! Worthy of great win,, big congrats !
George   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 9:59 PM
A vividly enthralling personification, capturing the very essence of storms . Thank you for sharing, Faye. bfn Your friend in poetry, Lainie
Jerden Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Love the personification... Well done! Congratulations!
Callus Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Metaphorically speaking this is one of the very best entries that I have read. Enjoyed it immensely. This was a storm caused through frustration...no doubt about it!:) Congrats on a deserved win, Faye. // paul
Gibson Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Paul. Your comments are very meaningful.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Love the five lines on the first hahaha you have me smiling ...:) this the only storm I read so far with a touch of laughter..:) great write kudos!
Chutani Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 1:01 AM
a beautiful play between earth and storm through your rhyme, Faye. Congrats on the fine win. Mohan
Nance Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 8:48 PM
What an image, great to see this one on the winners list :) happy hugs :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 6:29 PM
such passion makes this a great read Faye congrats on 4th place
Gibson Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Shadow, for the placement on your contest.
Stmichael Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 1:57 PM
A powerful metaphor there...enjoyed reading.
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 12:55 AM
There is always peace after the storms, Faye
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 5:44 PM
a downpour of strong lines with an ending that calms.. wonderful, faye!.. huggs
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