Storm Dance

We danced quickstep before the storm
 my pups eager -- eyes wide
 we raced in the rustling grasses
 the early winds whispering beware to the trees
 then the rushing air and the sky drumming began
 the crows watched cawing hidden in the pines
 the birds chirped and swore as the wind began to roar
 the trees swayed and beat against each other’s limbs,  
 near the thundering waves of the east cliff drive
 the ocean whipped its greenish blue hue into white foam
 there is thumping on the roof now
 as the ice blue sky becomes cobalt electric air
 the birds grow quiet hiding in green sanctums
 there is moaning, and a fearful snapping of the boughs
 oh the howling winds  
 the dogs and I now silent in the house  
 in awe hiding in the most distant space
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 9:00 PM
hahaha... I like this, Linda. I too do the same. If I start see or smelling the air change I rush to take my dog out to the park. He won't go around here he makes me so mad sometimes. It's a routine thing we instilled in him since he was a pup. That is why I go into the pavilion if I'm caught in the storm, it comes to quick. He goes out in that rain and goes then runs back.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 9:06 AM
You made me feel like I was there. Excellent imagery.
Milgate Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 5:42 PM
thank you hope you haven't been near one of these. Always enjoy your poems.
Buehler Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 11:01 PM
I love your realistic and intense portrayal of a storm, Linda. The imagery is dazzling. :)
Milgate Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 5:43 PM
Thank you in the past has been just like that. Now we will enter drought--sigh.
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