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Storm Coming

Red sky streams through the clouds Rain lingers on new leaves Clinging until its weight drops Smashes into the hard ground . Water runs along the tiny trails in the mud Worms stir to the lap of the tide Birds sit expectantly awaiting the feast. The sweet smell of the meadow wafts on the breeze All charged with the storm that approaches The corn rustles as the wind caresses its limbs The field mice snuggle together, warm and soft The sky darkens the clouds roll in thick and black Thunder rumbles through them shouting its arrival Quite now…. waiting for the flashing forks Blinding light .. A spark. The fire turns the sky red.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2016 12:58:00 PM
JACKIE, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:43:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jackie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone here is willing to help. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2011 2:57:00 PM
Jackie, I like this weather related poem. You have brought us along to see the changes brought on by the storm. I particularly like the field mice snuggling bit Look for my poem on the weather subject with a bit of drama mixed in.
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