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Storm Coming

The grey ocean swells White caps start to raise their heads Seabirds swoop and dive......

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Date: 7/31/2009 10:01:00 AM

great poem and love the title. enjoy your day.

Date: 7/22/2009 6:27:00 PM

That was a realy Great poem! I was picturing a nice, warm beach in my head while I was reading it! Lol! X's and O's ... Amber

Date: 7/21/2009 5:49:00 PM

Now you're talking. My first love. I've never seen the Pacific but most of the oceans and seas in the Northern hemisphere. Vince

Date: 7/20/2009 11:18:00 AM

I felt like I was Blue fishing Barbara ! Great Haiku ! james

Date: 7/18/2009 5:59:00 PM

White caps start to raise their heads..genius..well written haiku.

Date: 7/18/2009 2:18:00 PM

You paint the scene quite well with your words. Like the ending. Keep on writing! Karen

Date: 7/18/2009 12:02:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Barbeeg, Excellent Haiku Are we deep sea fishing that's where I went with this spectacular Write Superb LOVE ALWAYS... HG

Date: 7/18/2009 5:14:00 AM

Lovely restless feel to this, Barbara. I love it!

Date: 7/18/2009 2:38:00 AM

Super Haiku Barbara, imagery is perfect here, a most delightful read, Mail for you>>James

Date: 7/18/2009 1:33:00 AM

Barbara, very expressive I can just see and feel the scene. Sara

Date: 7/18/2009 1:05:00 AM

i can feel the storm,its vivid in your haiku my good friend and great poet--charma

Date: 7/17/2009 11:45:00 PM

Like the colour contrasts in L1/2 BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments