Storm Clouds Haiku

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Birds restless this dawn Clouds sugget fierce storm coming World confusion reigns I/31/2024

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/7/2024 1:37:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku write with a great picture. Have a wonderful day writing away....................

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/17/2024 8:54:00 AM

Hi Paula! So lare in responding , gee the mail was in my mailbox,so sorrt. I enjoyed writing the haiku, and I think the picture is really delightful.. Thank you and again sorry I am late. Pangie xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/4/2024 12:14:00 PM

The birds know. They tell us if we but listen. Nice last line Pangie dear! :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/5/2024 1:15:00 PM

Hello, Linda..thank you. Those last libes in Haikusmake all the difference. And,, by the way, you make a difference in my life, as I iknow you are in my corner, whether you read me or not! You are quite special to me. Love you, Pangie.xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/1/2024 8:15:00 AM

You're right, a big storm is coming and the doomsday clock is near midnight. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/1/2024 9:27:00 AM

Well, Tom, glad you are aware of it. Sadly, the news hides the true third rail we are walking on. There have been 161 strikes on US bases and our Secretary of Defense will do nothing. Iran supplies all terror groups worldwide, we lost three soldiers yesterday. Plus UNRA and current president funds Iran. The caliphate suppirted by a free world? Yes, indeed. Pangie xx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/31/2024 8:43:00 PM

A very descriptive Haiku. I could feel the buildup of clouds. Thanks for this journey.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/1/2024 9:07:00 AM

Hello, Hilda! Glad you felt the thunder of the clouds. This Haiku has an omninous semse, and it is meant to. Thhank you. Pangie xx