Storm

Thunder is banging, it is early but dark as night Torrential rain falls, wind blows everything in sight With this storm, mother nature is showing her might Tornado warnings, flood watches, enough to cause fright In these mountains, where usually things are alright The rain is so hard now, I may need my boat in flight Just in case you see me, it's me on a float this night Heidi Sands 7/1/17

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Edward Mccall

Date: 7/4/2017 3:33:00 PM

Yet another enjoyable read Heidi. Although I don't think the storm was very enjoyable.

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/2/2017 11:41:00 AM

Love the humor in this tense situation. I am caught on storms too. Very well written.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2017 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Janis. It was a strong one, and thankfully everything turned out ok.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/1/2017 7:34:00 PM

I hope things work out ok for you.I like the way each sentence ends with a play upon night.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2017 7:39:00 PM

Hi Alfred. All is ok. Still raining, but the worst of the storm is passed for now. Thank you :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2017 6:34:00 PM

This storm sounds so scary Heidi I am not much of a sailor which is not good when you live on a little island surrounded by sea lol:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2017 6:49:00 PM

Hi Jan. This one was a bad one. Thankfully calming now. But a branch came down and went into the ground like a spear standing up. Good thing nothing was in the way of that! I can't imagine being on a little island, although I bet it is beautiful. Thanks for your visit :)