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Forced by changing season billows set sail aft the mountains like forceful Viking ships. Rage branches whipping in winds obscured lips; leaves wave saying goodbye before the gale finding a path through the tall sagging grass. A drowned sound barely above a murmur and the only thing left standing firmer was the sun behind the horizon mass. 9/3/2019 Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/16/2019 11:16:00 AM
Eve congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your beautifully penned enclosed rhyme.
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Date: 9/12/2019 1:35:00 PM
A real beauty you penned. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:55:00 PM
- Eve, congratulations on your winning poem ... beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2019 7:53:00 AM
Rhythmic and beautiful, Eve ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 9/10/2019 2:22:00 PM
Wonderful write Eve..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 9/10/2019 1:47:00 PM
I love the imagery in this, Eve, congrats on your first place win. Hugs, John
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Date: 9/10/2019 12:10:00 PM
Eve I see why this won! Flowed seamlessly!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/10/2019 12:10:00 PM
Oh congrats!;)
Date: 9/4/2019 8:13:00 AM
beautiful rhythm and rhyme sweet Eve, everything about this she will love. Good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 9/4/2019 3:24:00 AM
Loved the imagery and rhyme scheme abba etc. Hugs
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