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brisk breezes blowing squirrels scurry for acorns autumn is coming written June 20, 2021

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/24/2021 6:51:00 PM

With summer hurling me into 100 plus degree days, I am longing for autumn too!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/24/2021 7:31:00 PM

I think many mid-westerners would enjoy that brisk breeze as I write. Thanks, again, for your visit, your reads, and your very interesting and informative comments.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/24/2021 5:15:00 PM

Isn't it too early for Autumn, my friend? We still didn't even go to the beach, just kidding:) this a fine penned haiku. I like the first line: brisk breezes blowing. Have a great evening

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/24/2021 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad. Yes, it is, and I had not planned to publish it on here, but then I feared I might accidentally delete it before October or so. Any time the temps get upwards of 100 like in some parts of the midwest, they are pleased to have their thoughts turned to autumn, I think.