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Stopping for a Coffee on a Morning Walk

Bleak winter Melbourne morning, a cold wind coming in from across the Bay and blowing down the street, past the Esplanade Cafe with the smell of coffee and warm air spilling out from an open door. I stop, look at the cake and pastry display through the window, the basket of freshly baked croissants, Danish pastries topped with strawberries and apricots and glazed with syrup. A cloud of steam from the espresso machine adds a touch of the surreal. Anticipation moistens my mouth on the sight of French vanilla slices plump with custard and cream, muffins erupting from their papery patties, Portuguese tarts, thick slices of carrot cake topped with icing. I savor each with an imaginative bite and decide my treat… then groan. I've left my wallet at home. ( for Deb M )

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Date: 6/27/2024 6:56:00 AM
Hello Paul, I really enjoyed reading your poem this morning as I drank my 2nd cup of coffee. I just love whenever there is a twist that I was not expecting, and yours is one of those. If I were there with you, I would have pulled out my wallet, and we would have feasted and knocked back that cup of coffee. All of a sudden, I am hungry for a croissant! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/29/2024 4:53:00 PM
Many thanks for your generosity Daniel...would accept your kind offer and return favor. The poem lent itself to the turn at the end... Cheers my friend...
Date: 6/27/2024 5:02:00 AM
Well, after reading this, I'm going to have to run out to the Cafe Du Monde for beignets and cafe au lait! Such a sweet tooth have we in common. And such a kind thing to do... write a poem for Deb. She's a sweetheart, too. Two Aussies having brekkie together. ;-) "Anticipation moistens my mouth..." Yeah, I would be drooling, too! Love your humor at the end. Multifaceted poets are the best kind. Hugs, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/29/2024 4:49:00 PM
Did you manage to score a coffee at the Cafe Du Monde....and what about the pastries. Pleasure to receive your comments Lin...you are most welcome to join us to enjoy the best made coffee in the world...take dare dear friend.
Date: 6/27/2024 2:36:00 AM
Haha l enjoyed that so much Paul….the whole poem l was right by your side….UNTIL….you forgot your wallet Ha!! Its on me my friend…..Cake and coffee?? Thankyou for taking me to the cafe this morning and writing that poem for me! Honoured my Aussie friend! Debx
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Deb M
Date: 7/1/2024 1:53:00 AM
I think l will join you with a vanilla slice please Paul….love them! Yummo! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/29/2024 4:43:00 PM
So kind dear Deb....strong cappuccino with French vanilla slice please. Seriously, I noted your comment re writing a poem about a cafe....next morning this one came out almost word for word so I had to gift it to you. What cake do you want ? Cheers my friend.
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Deb M
Date: 6/27/2024 10:41:00 AM
Absolutely lovely Lin…..Paul takes us all on such amazing journeys….he deserves a coffee n cake or two!! X
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/27/2024 5:03:00 AM
This was such a joy to read, Deb. I'm sure you were pleased to pay, right? ;-)
Date: 6/26/2024 11:01:00 PM
You'll never be short of coffee and cake money if you do requests Paul lol
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/29/2024 4:36:00 PM
So long as I'm not requested to sing...in this instance, had this offering drop into my lap. Thanks for reading my dear friend...

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