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Stood Up

STOOD UP Wet corner, bricks uneven, Rain driven in lines horizontal, Cutting knife-edge of gale. Distant bell chimes eleven. Turn up coat collarband: Imagine why she’s late For this our regular date; Light cigarette with cupped hand. She does not come, likely never will. Clock pointers slow to stop, Bolts go home in door of tobacco shop, Last bus strains past up the hill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/31/2011 1:48:00 PM
How sad, Syd, a genuinely moving poem. The last verse is particularly powerful! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:40:00 AM
i enjoyed this creative poem you wrote, very moving.
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Date: 3/30/2011 3:00:00 PM
Wonderful as always Sydney. Looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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Date: 3/30/2011 12:09:00 PM
awwh, what a date, syd... love the telegrahic lines so well defined in content and tonality... okay, mostly your stuff except for the last two ( joke).... splendid! soup mail in a while !:) hugggs, nette
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