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the wind sounds like a hundred violins playing as I walk a foot-worn path time has effaced inscriptions on some funeral stones where the dead repose in bones and I am stranded in a sea of mute stones all the precious skeletons a jumble beneath the stones that echo and groan death comes unbidden to each in time and the drum of time ceases hard stones, solid stones, granite stones bleached stones, broken stones, tall stones small stones, flat stones, baby stones weeping angel stones I wish for a stepping stone path as I tread over unknown bones that whisper and moan and I whisper your struggle is over now rest in peace beneath your eternal stones now, I stand still in this decaying under a deep blue sky and clouds sail and drift like sailboats oh, daggers pierce my heart for I have found your stone ... _______________________ August 8, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/Stones Copyright Protected, ID 08-1379-623-08 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Stones sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 08/14/2021 First Place

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Date: 9/20/2023 10:21:00 PM
What an interesting take for the theme, Constance... Just came here to read some of your poems... What a grand opening "the wind sounds like a hundred violins playing"... such a splendid verse.. and the last line touched my heart... Big Hugs... ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2023 3:50:00 PM
Ani, thank you so much for visiting my poem, I love this one very much, thanks for your lovely comment, and compliment, hugs
Date: 8/15/2021 9:56:00 AM
WOW!!! What an amazing story/write. Your pen was writing overtime on this one. I Love It. Have a blessed day/week.............
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:15:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the compliment and comment ~ Constance
Date: 8/14/2021 4:59:00 PM
Wow just sublime, Constance. Heartiest congratulations on your well-deserved first place win!
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Date: 8/15/2021 8:11:00 AM
Edward, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ Constance
Date: 8/14/2021 1:32:00 PM
Beautiful. Love it. Congrats and God bless you ... love, Gina
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Date: 8/15/2021 8:11:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the compliment, congrats and love ~ Constance
Date: 8/14/2021 11:53:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2021 8:12:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ Constance
Date: 8/14/2021 10:44:00 AM
A powerful write, Constance. The stones are so multifaceted in meaning. Congratulations! Brian
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2021 8:13:00 AM
Brian, thank you for the compliment and for the congratulations ~Constance
Date: 8/11/2021 11:35:00 AM
This is amazing Constance, your creativity and poignancy is so awesome, your lines and words that you have written 'Oh daggers pierce my heart, for I have found your bones' are truly powerful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/11/2021 2:08:00 PM
Jennifer, thanks for the compliment on my poem, I worked hard on this one, I sure hope it gets a placement ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/9/2021 1:08:00 PM
Oh my, this is classic, Constance. In a million years I could not have written something so gripping. From the first line it carried me along on that "foot-worn path." Good stuff!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:54:00 AM
Milt, thanks for the great compliment, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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