Premiere Contest WinnerStones


the wind sounds like a hundred violins playing
     as I walk a foot-worn path
        time has effaced inscriptions 
    on some funeral stones
        where the dead repose in bones
and I am stranded in a sea of mute stones
       all the precious skeletons a jumble beneath
   the stones that echo and groan
      death comes unbidden to each in time
         and the drum of time ceases
                 hard stones, solid stones, granite stones
        bleached stones, broken stones, tall stones
              small stones, flat stones, baby stones
                     weeping angel stones
I wish for a stepping stone path
                 as I tread over unknown bones
      that whisper and moan
              and I whisper your struggle is over now
  rest in peace beneath 
                 your eternal stones
now, I stand still in this decaying under a deep blue sky
             and clouds sail and drift like sailboats
                           oh, daggers pierce my heart
for I have found your stone ...

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August 8, 2021


Poetry/Free Verse/Stones
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1379-623-08
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Premier contest, Stones
sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 08/14/2021

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Jayasankar Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 10:21 PM
What an interesting take for the theme, Constance... Just came here to read some of your poems... What a grand opening "the wind sounds like a hundred violins playing"... such a splendid verse.. and the last line touched my heart... Big Hugs... ~ Ani
La France Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Ani, thank you so much for visiting my poem, I love this one very much, thanks for your lovely comment, and compliment, hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 9:56 AM
WOW!!! What an amazing story/write. Your pen was writing overtime on this one. I Love It. Have a blessed day/week.............
La France Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Paula, thanks for the compliment and comment ~ Constance
Ibeh Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 4:59 PM
Wow just sublime, Constance. Heartiest congratulations on your well-deserved first place win!
La France Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Edward, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Beautiful. Love it. Congrats and God bless you ... love, Gina
La France Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Gina, thanks for the compliment, congrats and love ~ Constance
Alex Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ Constance
Sambourne Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 10:44 AM
A powerful write, Constance. The stones are so multifaceted in meaning. Congratulations! Brian
La France Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Brian, thank you for the compliment and for the congratulations ~Constance
Proxenos Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:35 AM
This is amazing Constance, your creativity and poignancy is so awesome, your lines and words that you have written 'Oh daggers pierce my heart, for I have found your bones' are truly powerful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
La France Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 2:08 PM
Jennifer, thanks for the compliment on my poem, I worked hard on this one, I sure hope it gets a placement ~ love and serenity _Constance
Hankins Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Oh my, this is classic, Constance. In a million years I could not have written something so gripping. From the first line it carried me along on that "foot-worn path." Good stuff!
La France Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Milt, thanks for the great compliment, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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