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Free Verse   Philosophical look at inanimate stone city structures and the universal concept of oneness.

Gray shrouds cover my way sets the tone for the day. Our silent sun sends rays running round corners slowly beams burn off - melting morning misty mind. As I tread these stone slabs rapt in wonder of this awe, great stone bones in it all. Metropolis makes stirring sounds anxiously awakens around me. Rails screech like prehistoric birds, wind whistles through tunnels twirling, chatter and honks and hums. Hear humanities' street symphony. Parkways sever city canyons. I cross white striped asphalt rivers, pass primal Ponderosa stone spires. Wary walls of glassy eyes glare at me. Watch my droll daily drudge passively through towering hollow statues. I arrive to hug my office door, seeking some soulful signal. This inner city, my sentimental friend: now I'm fearful this soon will end. Put my face flush on its stone skin, felt a mounting tear in my eye, trickled out down between, turned my head to kiss its skin. Felt raspy, tasted of grit. Like kissing a corpse. Then pulled back and looked up its everstill edifice to the sky. Poses the query who am I? And there I stood a while and thought. How can we be one? How can it be me? 11/17/2019

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Date: 8/16/2021 5:31:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing the depth of your mind exposed by your poetic expression... though these lines are enigmatic to me... "Then pulled back and looked up its everstill edifice to the sky." God bless you.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 8/16/2021 5:37:00 AM
Excellent critique Beata. You got it. The grand contradiction inherent in oneness. Most think this is some poetic traipsing through New York City, but it isn't. Thanks ever so.
Date: 8/15/2021 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Stone Bones" is a wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Greg Gaul
Date: 8/15/2021 10:51:00 AM
Paula, the "oneness" theme is so hard to convey and so difficult to believe. Thank you for your read and commentary. Your visits are very much appreciated.
Date: 8/14/2021 11:54:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 8/14/2021 12:28:00 PM
Thank you for your visit, much appreciated.
Date: 12/13/2019 5:10:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Greg - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/13/2019 9:30:00 AM
Your comment is very reassuring. I respect the contests judges and the top competitors comments in evaluating my own work. Thank you for your supporting comments. Best wishes for a happy holiday to you also!
Date: 12/13/2019 2:47:00 AM
This outstanding poem grabbed my attention and held me spellbound until the end. This is the kind of poetry I come here to read. A Fave for me Greg! This one is tops in my book. Congratulations! xxoo Mele Kalikimaka! : )
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/13/2019 9:35:00 AM
Connie, what a great comment! Thanks so much. I must comment as well on Kalikimaka in your note. I'll be looking for you to fit that one crazy terrific word into a poem in the future, if you haven't done it already! That's a brain tester if there ever was one. Have a great holiday!
Date: 12/11/2019 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Greg
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/12/2019 6:18:00 AM
Greg, thanks so much and congrats to you too.
Date: 12/11/2019 10:35:00 AM
Congrats Greg on a magnificent free verse, loved everything about this, worthy of second place!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/11/2019 12:28:00 PM
John, most appreciative of the placement amongst so many other accomplished bards. Just delighted with your thoughtful comments. There are those who don't get this poem at all. Thank you for the effort of running the contest and doing it so compassionately.
Date: 12/11/2019 3:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 12/10/2019 9:54:00 PM
Excellent questions, all: The big ones... Congrats on your placement n the contest, Greg! Cheers, Gershon
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Greg Gaul
Date: 12/11/2019 1:38:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit and thoughtful insights Gershon. Congrats to you as well.

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