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SNOWFLAKE . . . 

Stillness of Winter

I went walking in the silent and stillness of winter,
     It had snowed softly on this cold, cold night;
Homes glowed from deep within and sparkled bright,
          A lonely snowflake kisses my cheek like a feather.

Wandering deserted town streets a solitary walker,
     Park benches buried in the pure white snow;
Quietly an icy and frosty stream still ripples and flows,
          And the shops are luminous in the town center.

At the church stained glass panes are welcoming,
     The pristine snow lay on the steps in tranquility;
I bow my head in prayer recalling memories of family,
          Whispering snowflakes fall on my hair blowing.

Faint a sound from something left near the church,
     I approach the snow draped box, unsure;
And a mewing, mewing within the wet enclosure,
          Then, a small forlorn white kitten lurched.

I cuddled the kitten in my arms brushing off each flake,
     A lonely girl and a lost kitten together this night;
While the snow was falling and falling in sheets of white,
        Kissing her head, I named my kitten, Snowflake.


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December 6, 2014

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Jayasankar Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Am so lucky for having got this beautiful poem to read at this moment dear Constance... Straight to my fave... So lovely the picture and the poem..with great imagery of winter and snowflakes... Last stanza will be my most favorite... Thank you for this amazing poem .. Hugs.. ~ Ani
La France Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Ani, thanks for finding this older poem of mine and for the compliment and the FAV, appreciate, peace _Constance
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Curtis and DM for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate so much ~
Babbit Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:57 AM
This was wonderful. May all your days be warm and cuddly.
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:43 PM
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Moorman Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Constance, my daughter is a cat lover. I had a kitten that took up at my house so the next time I visited my daughter, I took the cat to her because I knew it get a good home. She named it Pickle because had I not sheltered it and brought it to her, it would have "been in a pickle". Love what you do!
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:43 PM
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La France Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Anisha, Eve, and Charlie for visiting my poem and commenting, there is something special about finding a stray cat I think ~
Messina Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 6:04 AM
This is beautiful Constance, great imagery. When I was 10 years old I found a stray kitten, I was walking through the forest and she followed me home about a mile away. Love this story...Charlie
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:42 PM
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Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Dear Heart, great imagery and story. Hugs Eve~`*
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:42 PM
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Dutta Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Stillness of Winter....A lonely girl and a lost kitten together... Nice feeling.
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:41 PM
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La France Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Andrea I am glad you came to visit also and am looking forward to your poem in my contest and thanks for the beautiful comment ~
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Oh, Constance, this is such a beauty! I am glad I came to see your exmaple of enclosed rhyme because it is truly a gem. The picture with it is adorable. I see below that this is a true story. That makes it even better!
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:41 PM
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La France Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Jan, Connie, and Nette thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your lovely comments and Connie, I had a cat, I called Snowball also as a little girl, she came in my Christmas stocking.
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:54 AM
ohh, constance... i can feel your soul through this heartfelt write about a pet who was loved as snowflakes loved you back!.. hope to join you in this challenge!...huggs
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:40 PM
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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Awww this is so sweet Constance. I adore cats and once had a pure white cat I named snowball. This is a wonderful example for your contest! : )
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:40 PM
:-)
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 1:05 PM
what a charming poem Constance:-) I don't think I've written this form before and will see if I get inspired for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Hugs!
La France Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Kim for visiting and for the beautiful, hope you will enter my contest.
La France Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Hi Poetic Friends. This is an example of Enclosed Rhyme Form, for my newly posted contest. Your theme can be anything you want. I recall writing this poem back in 2014, and it was taken from life, I did find a white kitten in a box on the steps of the church one snowy night and I did call her Snowflake.
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September 1, 2018 at 12:01 PM
This is beautiful, Constance! Such a vivid image of hope! <3 Kim xx
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 1:39 PM
:-)
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