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All the roads lead between forward to the past
Still the same... it's you living inside my heart
Looking back on a runaway train on track
Somewhere tonight you know who you are

Still the same... it's you living inside my heart
Sometimes I wonder if I knew you when
Somewhere tonight you know who you are
So I wrote you a song against the wind 

Sometimes I wonder if I knew you when 
Twenty years from now, turn the page
So I wrote you a song against the wind 
Understanding night moves drift away 

Twenty years from now, turn the page 
Chances are without a doubt we've got tonight 
Understanding night moves drift away 
The answers in the question... I've got time 

Chances are without a doubt we've got tonight 
Looking back on a runaway train on track 
The answers in the question... I've got time 
All the roads lead between forward to the past

April 25, 2018

Music Pantoum Contest, By Silent One
Second Place

Bob Seger Songs

All The Roads
Between 
Forward To The Past
Somewhere Tonight
You Know Who You Are
Still The Same
It's You
Living Inside My Heart
Looking Back
Runaway Train
Sometimes
I Wonder
I Knew You When
So I Wrote You A Song
Against The Wind 
Twenty Years From Now
Turn The Page
Understanding
Night Moves
Drift Away
The Answers In The Question
I've Got Time 
Chances Are 
Without a Doubt
We've Got Tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/28/2018 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Susan on your win with so many son titles.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/28/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/27/2018 7:47:00 PM
Creative and excellent use of the song titles, Susan. They blend with ease into the rhythm of your lovely lines. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/28/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Susan. You are so sweet.
Date: 5/27/2018 4:21:00 PM
Great creative verse, Susan, congratulations on your Pantoum win... Hugs Eve
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/27/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve!
Date: 5/26/2018 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations for you win Susan. This is excellent :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/26/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/25/2018 7:40:00 AM
I like Bob Seger as well Susan. Well done on this collection of his.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/25/2018 11:24:00 PM
Thank you, Jean!
Date: 5/24/2018 2:06:00 PM
Back with congrats on your well deserved top win, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/24/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much. :)
Date: 5/24/2018 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations Susan on your wonderful placement with your Seger Tribute, well done xxoo
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/24/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thanks, Mike! :)
Date: 5/24/2018 1:31:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 2nd place in the contest, a great music choice Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/24/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 5/24/2018 1:05:00 PM
Hi Susan, This is a good tribute piece to Bob Seger in the Pantoum form. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/24/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis.
Date: 5/24/2018 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations, Susan - I love Bob Seger, glad you did his songs for the pantoum!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/24/2018 6:44:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 5/24/2018 12:12:00 PM
I've never heard of Bob Seger, but you did a great pantoum.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/24/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much! Am honored. He is a rock singer/songwriter/guitarist from the '60's, '70,'s and 80's mostly. On top of my list of favorites ever. Just saw him in concert last year. It was a fun contest. Thanks for sponsoring and for all you do.
Date: 4/27/2018 5:28:00 PM
Great pantoum. You used a lot of songs. Best wishes for the contest.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/28/2018 3:04:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/27/2018 3:38:00 PM
Perfect, Susan, luck in the contest.. a winner already
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/28/2018 3:04:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 4/27/2018 11:34:00 AM
One of my favorite recording artists, nicely done, Susan. Good luck in the contest. John
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/27/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thanks John. Was fun doing one like this. Never tried before. Went back in time with it.
Date: 4/27/2018 6:12:00 AM
Well written Pantoum Susan..you fit in so many titles in a short poem..best for a win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/27/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thank you! Crossing fingers :)

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