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Still Lovely

Oh, sweet nature you are beautiful but sad as you think back on the bounty you once had. Artic palaces stood firm for many years. Now the shifting, rising shore so closely nears. Yet in your changing seasons can be found still a lovely that in variance abounds. 4/2/19 Writing Challenge 6, 2nd Sponsor, Dear Heart Favorite Poem From Last Week Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Date: 5/1/2019 8:40:00 PM
Your poem flows with delicate sweetness and holds a sad but lovely message, Janis. Beautiful poetry, especially your first two lines, and yes, the loveliness in Nature's changing season still abounds, thankfully. Great video too. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/2/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Susan. I appreciate your fond comments. Blessings always, Janis.
Date: 4/18/2019 10:07:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/2/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thanks and blessings, Janis.
Date: 4/6/2019 12:47:00 PM
This beautiful poem is a fave for me Janis! I also enjoyed watching the beauty and drama of the changing seasons in the lovely video you privided. Thank you for sharing it. Gorgeous! Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo : )
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/6/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thanks much Connie. Blessings, Janis
Date: 4/5/2019 3:42:00 PM
Nicely done verse, Janis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/6/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 4/3/2019 12:36:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your second place win in my contest with this beautifully rhymed poem, and the video is amazing too ~
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/6/2019 3:00:00 PM
Nice Contest. Thanks for the motivation.
Date: 4/3/2019 4:18:00 AM
- A lovely poem Janis, congratulations on a great 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/3/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Anne.

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