Get Your Premium Membership

Still Life

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Janis Thompson.


Still Life Here is a picture, painted well of nature and man, a story to tell. Daily the time is quiet and still. The sun sets low on rolling hills. While all around the lake serene depicts a canopy of scene. By the lake, there is a home of shingled roof and umber tones. Through a window, a kettle boils in rooms where lady hands must toil. A painting lovely, this will be depicting life’s totality. Beside the house in close detail we see a pond on which to sail paper boats in winds of spring with ducks, swans and pretty things all on a canvas of delight a painting rightly called, “Still Life.” 2/20/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/9/2018 9:42:00 AM
Sian, your beautifully written verbal image mirrors this mystical painted picture so well, and brings it to life! Lovely! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Date: 6/2/2018 8:25:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Sian.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2018 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your imagery description of the painting is beautiful.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/22/2018 4:32:00 AM
Oh, my ... such a poignant poem, Janis. I never before read a poem quite this ... a poem describing a painting in such a vivid, detailed fashion. Very creative write, my talented poetess friend. The simplicity of expression is truly master linguistic poetry artwork. You paint pictures w/words extraordinarily well, dear lady. Love and smiles always.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/20/2018 6:30:00 PM
Beautiful scene, Janis. Lovely. Well done.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/20/2018 6:04:00 PM
lovely take on the series of words. Such a relaxing poem and picture in light of the busy day I've had today. Those days are so enjoyable w/o noise/confusion.
Login to Reply
Thompson Avatar
Janis Thompson
Date: 2/22/2018 2:44:00 PM
I am glad that this was helpful to you. Thanks for stopping by and take it easy.

Book: Shattered Sighs