Still I Sit Here Staring

Still I sit here staring

Sitting there in open form…breathing,
savoring a moment that claims the eyes
Collecting thoughts in a simmering row
of pasted visions on the curtains of a smile…
claiming nothing out of the sort

                     ~fingers dance the moonlight
                       along a sleepless trail
                       pecking seems the order 
                       as endings never fail~

Glowing like an ember fused,
beneath a mantle trimmed and shorn
Hidden in the lonely darkness
once presented in a cluttered dream
of pine cone cushions
and wicker trimmed French kisses 

                    ~words of stained glass meanings
                      in shadows on the pew
                      shaped to form the pattern
                      as light evades the view~

Groans of indecision
plague this page, smudged and weary,
scribble in fury and folded neatly
Edges meet in distracting lines
on crossword clues reaching down
across the face of what I have done

                    ~ink it merely scratches
                      the surface of the night
                      still I sit here staring
                      with nothing left to write~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/24/2019 1:41:00 PM
Hello Chris, nature is beautiful to see. No matter the season.It is a breathless beauty. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/30/2019 6:27:00 PM
not bad
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Chris Green
Date: 4/1/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/12/2019 3:13:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Chris:)
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Date: 1/21/2019 5:15:00 PM
Ink scratching the surface of the night...brilliant writing Chris, loved every word!
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Date: 1/13/2019 10:48:00 PM
This is almost like a prelude to the next one you wrote, Chris, the POTW. Sometimes it takes years for an artist's concept to be developed. You took just one day. Sitting there, wondering why you couldn't find the right words to pen -- and then, it gushes forth like a dam broke in your next poem. Outstanding on so many levels, Chris. Bravo!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn for always being so kind to me. I appreciate your nice comment
Date: 1/10/2019 2:17:00 PM
Your writing is amazing Chris. A process of thoughts, coming out like this. Love it :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Heidi so much. I am happy you liked this one
Date: 1/10/2019 2:05:00 PM
You are a silver tongued rascal, might I suggest a nice single malt or two, well done Chris...
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2019 10:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie. I may take that suggestion
Date: 1/10/2019 11:29:00 AM
ohh, i struggle to find the right words and progression of thoughts when the muse or numb hours become nonchalant, chris... splendid work which captures the zig-zag whirl of this moment!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2019 12:10:00 PM
Thank you so very much Nette. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 1/10/2019 10:14:00 AM
Distracting lines..but still the edges meet in corners..Indecisions..Stained glass...Smudged Ink...Life is one big crossword..at times clueless...Other times so clear...But no matter how dark it gets..the moon shines..at times just glows dimly...but its always there...and even in all the emptiness and loniliness.....It still lights up our heart...Always there...Always. So much to read between the lines Chris...So much I can relate to.WoW.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine for your sweet and beautiful thoughts on my poem. I truly do appreciate all of the nice words you always leave for me to find on my poems. Your comment is beautiful poetry to me.
Date: 1/10/2019 9:38:00 AM
Hi Chris, You stuggled to write this? Whatever the case your writing and your style is amazing. I enjoyed the read. I'm w ith Brenda, spending 24 hours your would be amazing:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2019 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis. I am happy you liked this.
Date: 1/9/2019 6:24:00 PM
I can just see you, straining with each poetic thought, elbows on your desk, fingers running through your head and finally writing something beautiful like you always do.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. You are always so kind to me.
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