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lunch, nap, BINGO, pills window view reveals dark sky wheel chair rolls along Loved ones’ last visit was—when? Don’t forget her; she’s not gone! February 26, 2018, entered in Lewis Raynes's Depression Poetry Contest placed 4th of 7

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Date: 4/11/2018 1:12:00 PM
Oh my goodness Janice how heartbreaking. Stirs such emotion!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/15/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comment, FJ. Janice
Date: 3/16/2018 11:45:00 AM
So succinct yet powerful in portraying loneliness. Excellent write. Warm regards, Laura.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/16/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura! Janice
Date: 3/2/2018 8:54:00 PM
Back with much deserved congrats, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/2/2018 10:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 3/2/2018 6:28:00 PM
oh my, it's so sad and sadly true for many of them in those places. WEll done and congrats.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/2/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 2/28/2018 11:09:00 AM
Hopelessness, grief, well done Janice, congratulations...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/28/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie! Janice
Date: 2/28/2018 10:56:00 AM
So much sadness -- abandonment -- packed into just five lines. A gut-check of a winner. Way to go, Janice! :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/28/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thank you so much. I LOVE this comment, Gershon. Janice
Date: 2/28/2018 9:00:00 AM
I love em brief and potent. Fantastic affective ink Janice! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/28/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! Janice
Date: 2/27/2018 8:57:00 PM
Janice, congratulations on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/27/2018 9:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 2/27/2018 8:48:00 PM
A beautiful and scary write Janice, congratulations on ur winning write
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/27/2018 9:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lewis! Janice
Date: 2/27/2018 4:49:00 PM
You articulated well the emptiness of old age..good theme..best for a win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/27/2018 5:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 2/27/2018 9:58:00 AM
Great message, Janice. Superbly done in a delightful compact package.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/27/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice

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