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Still Bleeding

Sadness bleeds the weeping heart
beyond the clouded penitentiary
where tombstones sit in lighted valleys
and songbirds fall from the skies

Wallowing on gallow’d heels
past lavender of the once scented 
Scraping the white picket fence
till flakes of life rest scattered on the sun baked walk

Cracks in the concrete beckon,
whistling in the wind swept frowns
on a truthful Tuesday
that holds no meaning

At this gathering, the masses run
and banners wave a hasty lingering farewell
Popcorn vendors remove their striped clothing
of peppermint colors and butter stained collars

Trees leave and leaves wither
beneath this canopy of sorrow
painted in a language
that does not include love 

A lone black cat zigzags its way, 
searching for a soul it may affect,
as wingless sparrows squirm in rhythm
to “Born under a bad sign”

Dreams now sent afloat on aimless streams
of melting memories are softened by the heat
yet intensified by the arcade mirror
that skews the view formed before the mind

Carnivals, use this day to guess your weight
for your age does not matter, you are dead anyway
In your right hand one, in your left the other
two pieces…still bleeding…weeping
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 10, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Very deep and melancholy poem, Chris. Amidst the sadness there is beauty. I love your usage of symbolism and imagery. Truly wonderful poem. Just remember, with every break in the heart there is the chance to heal and become stronger.
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November 11, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Thank you so much Christy. I won't forget, I know it eventually heals, some things just take longer than others.
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November 10, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Oh my this is a powerful poem ..very sad ..and deep..I can read the soul in between lines..and who it belongs too...So many lines I can pick...and get touched by them...
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November 10, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Thanks you Charmaine. I know this was a little dark and sad, sometimes the ink moves in that direction. So I am so grateful for your kind words and the friendship you show me. You my sweet friend make writing worth while. Thank you again.
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November 10, 2016 at 4:05 PM
A favourite.
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November 10, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Very intensely sad and deep one Chris. Expressed in such intriguing ways to read.
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November 10, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Yeah, I thought I'd give soup a break from the flowery love poems for a little bit. Thank you my friend. Your kindness is always felt deeply.
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