Still

Ice fell like shattered glass on the ground The wind blew a harsh crackling sound Shaking off jackets of ice From the trees once bare, sliced With crystals on ground Scattered around The ice spill Became Still Heidi Sands 1/26/18

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Mike Hauser

Date: 1/28/2018 11:43:00 AM

Nice!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/28/2018 11:44:00 AM

Thanks Mike ! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/27/2018 5:56:00 PM

goodness, smooth writing with greeat inages, heidi,, huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Nette! :)

Silent One

Date: 1/27/2018 9:16:00 AM

Great nonet Heidi.. you did well considering the restrictions of this form..

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One :) Have a nice day.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/26/2018 3:03:00 PM

Your poem brings forth images of falling ice and the sounds, and scatter..very well depicted, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Vijay. That is how it was :)