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You promised me before the dripping sun Beneath the breaking clouds, eyes lowered, breath steady Feet shifting on the broken leaves You promised me before the dying day Beside the crackling fire illuminated smile you'll always be my friend I listened for you in the cold dead night drown by the racing wind's shrill Nothing left but broken leaves and shattered dreams; holding on to that tiny, perfect moment where time stood still

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/7/2014 10:57:00 PM
I can relate good work
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Date: 6/22/2014 11:57:00 AM
Hi Dana, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda
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Date: 6/17/2014 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win win P.D."s contest. Dana
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Date: 6/17/2014 2:36:00 AM
A sweet win, Dana....Love ~SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2014 2:03:00 AM
Dana.... Congratulations:) Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest... Stop by and enjoy my newest poem "Mr President" OR my fresh blog "NOT ENOUGH" if you want or have time. :):):) Hugs & Love ~~ LINDA ~~
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Date: 6/13/2014 3:45:00 PM
Good job. Could feel the Sadness
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:11:00 AM
Your poetry is beautiful just like you are, Dana.
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