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Still Like the Frozen ice Along the shore The tree without wind On the hill where birds soar The deer, noticing something Movement in corner of their eyes Things unnoticed, as if in disguise Waiting to move and bring a new surprise Heidi Sands 1/8/23

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Date: 1/9/2023 7:01:00 AM
Winter seems to bring things to a halt, Wonderful write Heidi, hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/9/2023 7:03:00 AM
Yes. This winter has been beautiful here too. Thank you. Hugs :)
Date: 1/9/2023 4:32:00 AM
I can just picture this Heidi as you have expressed this well! Beautiful imagery! Happy Monday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/9/2023 4:41:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 1/8/2023 7:34:00 PM
The sweet rhyming adds to the delight of this etheree, Heidi! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/9/2023 4:41:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. Smiles :)
Date: 1/8/2023 2:27:00 PM
There is beauty in nature's silent pause. Well conveyed, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/8/2023 3:31:00 PM
There certainly is Vijay. Thank you, my friend :)

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