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Stifled Dreams

The life that's long brings to a man a change Of those traditions then to modern thrill. May journeys, that we're staid, now rearrange To open thoughts and chance for a new skill. Does work march on by rules of a new drill? The World turns man like marbles in a jar, And leaves him searching for a perfect star.

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Cynthia Vipond

Date: 4/15/2024 10:10:00 PM

I love the sweet depth of this! Cx

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/15/2024 11:02:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/14/2024 8:51:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away........

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/15/2024 9:38:00 AM

Thank you Paula. This was my first rhyme royal.

Daniel Caplin

Date: 4/12/2024 11:31:00 PM

Hi Hilda , such a powerful poem , we are ever evolving , revolving just as you say like marbles in a jar , such a beautiful poem to reflect on . Danny

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/15/2024 9:40:00 AM

Thank you. I enjoyed writing it. Blessings to you.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/2/2024 5:26:00 AM

i enjoyed this one, particularly the last two lines - it's a very strong closure...thanks for visiting and commenting on my work

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/2/2024 7:15:00 AM

Thank you for visiting. I'm honored that you liked it.

Valsa George

Date: 4/1/2024 8:51:00 PM

This is a poem that invokes profound thoughts, dear Hilda. What is man's place in the modern world...... isn't he like marbles in a jar? We have to change according to the demands of the time and learn new skills!

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/1/2024 9:02:00 PM

It seems so. Most of us get tired of it though. Thank you for visiting.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/31/2024 5:12:00 AM

Very beautiful writing, Hilda; we are forever searching. Searching the distance heavens for our perfect star...too often ignoring the dear light within -- outshining all our man made glitters. Your write really god me thinking. Have a great day my friend.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/31/2024 7:06:00 AM

Thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/30/2024 3:51:00 PM

The ups and downs of life's journey are beautifully reflected in your poems, Hilda. The deep wisdom that was incorporated within your poetry was very appreciated.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/30/2024 8:25:00 PM

Thank you. We live in a competitive world.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/28/2024 2:16:00 PM

Like marbles in a jar...I like that. Good poem :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/28/2024 6:42:00 PM

Thank you

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/27/2024 10:21:00 AM

Beautiful all the way thriugh, I’m with Karen on the last two lines! Pangie

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/27/2024 10:57:00 AM

Thank you for your input. The last two lines pretty much sums it up.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/24/2024 11:19:00 PM

The last two lines sum up the poem perfectly! Enjoyed reading Hilda!

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/25/2024 12:27:00 AM

Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2024 7:33:00 AM

- Definitely something to think about, Hilda - Well written...the last two lines are excellent :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/23/2024 12:51:00 PM

Thank you for your encouragement.

Bill Baker

Date: 3/22/2024 5:17:00 PM

Intriguing poetry, Hilda. Life can certainly thrill and disappoint us as we travel through life. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/22/2024 7:40:00 PM

Thank you. Sending hugs.

David Fisher

Date: 3/22/2024 4:49:00 PM

Enjoyed the depth of your poem. I've been thinking similar thoughts(yet I haven't thought poetically about them); I'm glad to see how well you put them into a short rhyme.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/22/2024 7:39:00 PM

Thank you for reading it.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/22/2024 7:34:00 AM

So very beautiful--in content and tone. A delightful poem Hilda. Much enjoyed the voice and depth.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/22/2024 8:43:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2024 5:19:00 AM

Dear hilda, what a deeply meaningful write this is, i must also highlight and appreciate your rhymes and flow of your well articulated lines as well as how youv delivered this really is brilliant . I especially loved the last two lines, left an impression, so poetically moving! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/22/2024 7:00:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words. Have a pleasant weekend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2024 2:31:00 AM

Great rhyming in this poem. Loved reading it.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/22/2024 6:58:00 AM

Thank you, Victor.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/21/2024 8:46:00 PM

'like marbles in a jar' rings my bell. Kudos, Hilda.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/21/2024 10:01:00 PM

Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/21/2024 7:55:00 PM

Hilda, in this poem, your thoughts are expressed in such a lovely fashion. This is a fave. :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/21/2024 8:20:00 PM

Thank you. Have a nice weekend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/21/2024 8:39:00 AM

Dear Hilda, your excellent poem is a deep, thought-provoking and beautifully expressed poetic gem. Your last two lines are especially profound. May we continue to dreams and wish upon stars. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/21/2024 8:46:00 AM

Thank you. I appreciate the very encouraging comments. Warmest wishes to you.

Gary Radice

Date: 3/21/2024 2:52:00 AM

As time marches on I often feel I’m playing a game I don’t know the rules of and losing my own marbles as a result. :) Cheers - Gary

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/21/2024 3:55:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/20/2024 4:45:00 PM

Me too, It’s nice to support each other, I feel. Enjoy your evening.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/20/2024 5:36:00 PM

Thank you.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/20/2024 3:55:00 PM

So true, I like the part of marbles in a jar, Searching takes a lifetime. Beautifully said.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/20/2024 4:09:00 PM

Thank you. I always like hearing from people I am following.

Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2024 3:49:00 PM

So true, unfortunately. The rhyming flows well in this... :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/20/2024 4:08:00 PM

Thank you. I had to remember iambic pentameter.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/20/2024 2:45:00 PM

A lovely and though-provoking write, my friend. Have a wonderful evening, Hilda.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/20/2024 4:07:00 PM

Thank you. Take care.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/20/2024 1:17:00 PM

I think after all is said and done, searching...best sums it all up. Forever searching...trying to developed philosophies, understandings that allow is to peer around, split the curtain and transcend the mysteries of life and death. Excellent read!

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/20/2024 2:34:00 PM

I'm glad you liked it. Searching is a lifetime job.