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I bring her red and white carnations "Roses," she says, "only roses. Valentine's tradition." Breezy pressure of non-acceptance Words that flatten me like a dull sermon Squirm inducing to understand what I'm up against Commands that taste like salt Re-booting the rhythm of ritual Re-framing an approach to love For however long the florist remains open Poem composed: February 16, 2021 Revised: April 18, 2021

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Date: 3/2/2021 10:55:00 AM
Quite delightful Brian! Tradition is strong and unrelenting for Valentine's Day! So glad you have an understanding florist! How were the roses accepted? All the best!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/2/2021 11:29:00 AM
Hi Sam, Thanks for your message. I did try for a different twist to Valentine's Day. In the upgrade, I bought a small miniature roses bush for the table. The bush was transplanted to the garden in May. Both flowering arrangements were accepted. Best wishes + many thanks for dropping by. Cheers Brian
Date: 3/1/2021 7:32:00 AM
Thanks for adding your Valentine twist. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/1/2021 7:54:00 AM
A most appropriate contest for February. Thanks very much for sponsoring. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 2/25/2021 5:57:00 AM
Oh my! Such a clear picture of “who” you are up against,
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/25/2021 5:47:00 PM
Hi Caren, Yes, such words were actually spoken to me. Roses on Valentine's Day. Carnations simply don't measure up. Thank you for reading + responding to my free verse. Health + happiness regards, Brian

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