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moon sweeps like a lantern glazed in sterling stars

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2024 12:13:00 PM

I couldn't find soupmail for you. Only email?? I came here to your lovely lanterne. Now I notice lanterne form ends with e. All this time I believed you wanted us to use that lanterne form. Haha. Do you have any example somewhere of what you want? Either your own or someone else's? You can soupmsil me an answer?

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/1/2023 12:00:00 PM

Hello Ink Empress, the stars shine brightly from the sky. shine like diamonds. Also silver sterling. Enjoy hyour day my friend. /Darlene/

Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/21/2023 8:14:00 AM

Hello Empress. How very true. I love the knight sky and all that she brings and illuminates thus your very words are true. Your imagery is clear and vivid. Allow me to simply say "just beautiful. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent not to mention positivity and motivation. Through your very words we readers can tell you see in life and everything around you. May that always be. Have a wonderful day and week. Peace and Blessings always (smile)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:18:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Ink :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/19/2023 7:51:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. Love your Short/Sweet/Beautiful Lanterne write. I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a blessed day/week......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2023 1:48:00 PM

Love this, and big congrats on your win

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/18/2023 12:55:00 PM

this has to be one of the most beautiful lanternes on the winners' list - love 'sterling stars'! congrats on your win in the contest :)

Sabrina Millicent

Date: 11/18/2023 11:27:00 AM

Hearty congrats on your win. Such a beautiful piece from start to finish. I love poems that celebrate the moon and stars as they deserve equal attention.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/18/2023 9:49:00 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved top-winning placement, dear Ink. Blessings

John Lawless

Date: 11/18/2023 6:46:00 AM

Beautifully done Ink, an exquisite expose' of the moon's beauty.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2023 4:37:00 AM

Congratulations on this creative winning work. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 11/17/2023 7:52:00 PM

So beautiful.... ! Great imagery. Congratulations on your first place win dear Empress !

Ink Empress
Date: 11/18/2023 2:05:00 AM

Thank you sweet valsa i appreciate you so much always

Joseph May

Date: 11/17/2023 7:20:00 PM

Lovely write Empress, Congrats on your win

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/17/2023 1:27:00 PM

Dearest Inky, once again your images leave me breathless - our cold, lifeless moon glazed in starling with an interior light! Even in a lanterne your amazing word usage weaves an enchanted spell! What an inspiration you are! I will never again look at the moon "sweeping" across midnight without seeing your magic - my eyes filled with "sterling stars." What a gift you are. You inspire me to reach for and to capture "sterling stars!" Sending you blessings, dear friend!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/17/2023 10:53:00 AM

Short/Sweet/Beautiful... Love It... Have a fun day writing away............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/16/2023 6:55:00 PM

How beautiful. I never thought of the moon this way.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:06:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much for your kind thoughts and for being so supportive. Truly grateful

Paige Hind

Date: 11/16/2023 6:45:00 PM

Another gorgeous piece, Ink! May the moon sweep over you tonight. :)

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:08:00 AM

Awwn thank you how sweet of you to say that? I appreciate you so very much

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 4:13:00 PM

a beautiful Lanterne, Ink. I love the simplicity and conciseness of this form--one that you seem to have mastered eloquently. Am faving this as an example the next time I want to create a Lanterne. Have a splendid day, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much ahh your lanterne was way more beautiful and magical dear sara . I appreciate you being so kind always

Bill Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 4:05:00 PM

A fine Lanterne poem, Ink. I hope you're entering this one in the contest, my friend. I see below, you have the same intruder that I had earlier. It is absurd to have to deal with people like this. It is a big distraction. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Ink Empress
Date: 11/16/2023 7:18:00 PM

Ah good morning, just blocked him. What a strange troll he is.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/16/2023 2:00:00 PM

Wonderful!

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/16/2023 7:35:00 AM

Dear Ink, The magnificence of the heavens is depicted really beautifully. The moon, which is analogous to a luminous lantern, contains the essence of poetry and had inspired many poets within a composition that is laconic. Well done BOL in the contest

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:15:00 AM

Awwn dear sotto i appreciate your support so very much , you are so kind and im grateful for your poetic presence always

Tom Woody

Date: 11/16/2023 6:12:00 AM

Cosmic beauty expressed so poetically

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:32:00 AM

Ah thank you always … for being so supportive. Truly grateful

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 11/16/2023 6:08:00 AM

The moon as a lantern, such a poetic peice of writing captured in just a few lines

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:36:00 AM

Ah thank you so very much always for being so supportive. I appreciate your kindness

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/16/2023 6:02:00 AM

Moon --a lantern glazed in stars--beautiful imagination, Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/17/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear Vijay always

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/16/2023 6:01:00 AM

My gosh, I am loving your exquisite wordsmithery here, "moon sweeps like a lantern" Just when I read this, I was like, wowww! "Glazed in sterling stars" Ahh, the alliteration and the adjective...You've gracefully carved simile here.. Imagining the moon like a lantern.. This overall gives me a magical feeling, that's so pure, celestial and magnificent! Even your micro writes look like works of art, along with your impeccable long writes...I absolutely adore this cute lanterne! :) sending you love