sterling stars

moon sweeps like a lantern glazed in sterling stars
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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 12:13 PM
I couldn't find soupmail for you. Only email?? I came here to your lovely lanterne. Now I notice lanterne form ends with e. All this time I believed you wanted us to use that lanterne form. Haha. Do you have any example somewhere of what you want? Either your own or someone else's? You can soupmsil me an answer?
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Hello Ink Empress, the stars shine brightly from the sky. shine like diamonds. Also silver sterling. Enjoy hyour day my friend. /Darlene/
Ricci Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Hello Empress. How very true. I love the knight sky and all that she brings and illuminates thus your very words are true. Your imagery is clear and vivid. Allow me to simply say "just beautiful. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent not to mention positivity and motivation. Through your very words we readers can tell you see in life and everything around you. May that always be. Have a wonderful day and week. Peace and Blessings always (smile)
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 2:18 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Ink :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Love your Short/Sweet/Beautiful Lanterne write. I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a blessed day/week......................
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 1:48 PM
Love this, and big congrats on your win
Puddifoot Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:55 PM
this has to be one of the most beautiful lanternes on the winners' list - love 'sterling stars'! congrats on your win in the contest :)
Millicent  Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Hearty congrats on your win. Such a beautiful piece from start to finish. I love poems that celebrate the moon and stars as they deserve equal attention.
Poet Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 9:49 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved top-winning placement, dear Ink. Blessings
Lawless Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Beautifully done Ink, an exquisite expose' of the moon's beauty.
Kendrick Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Congratulations on this creative winning work. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara K
George Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:52 PM
So beautiful.... ! Great imagery. Congratulations on your first place win dear Empress !
Empress Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:05 AM
Thank you sweet valsa i appreciate you so much always
May Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Lovely write Empress, Congrats on your win
Kauffman Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Dearest Inky, once again your images leave me breathless - our cold, lifeless moon glazed in starling with an interior light! Even in a lanterne your amazing word usage weaves an enchanted spell! What an inspiration you are! I will never again look at the moon "sweeping" across midnight without seeing your magic - my eyes filled with "sterling stars." What a gift you are. You inspire me to reach for and to capture "sterling stars!" Sending you blessings, dear friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Short/Sweet/Beautiful... Love It... Have a fun day writing away............
Greenhough Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 6:55 PM
How beautiful. I never thought of the moon this way.
Empress Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Awwn thank you so much for your kind thoughts and for being so supportive. Truly grateful
Hind Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 6:45 PM
Another gorgeous piece, Ink! May the moon sweep over you tonight. :)
Empress Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Awwn thank you how sweet of you to say that? I appreciate you so very much
Baker Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 4:05 PM
A fine Lanterne poem, Ink. I hope you're entering this one in the contest, my friend. I see below, you have the same intruder that I had earlier. It is absurd to have to deal with people like this. It is a big distraction. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Empress Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 7:18 PM
Ah good morning, just blocked him. What a strange troll he is.
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Wonderful!
Empress Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much
Poet Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Dear Ink, The magnificence of the heavens is depicted really beautifully. The moon, which is analogous to a luminous lantern, contains the essence of poetry and had inspired many poets within a composition that is laconic. Well done BOL in the contest
Empress Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Awwn dear sotto i appreciate your support so very much , you are so kind and im grateful for your poetic presence always
Culverhouse Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 6:08 AM
The moon as a lantern, such a poetic peice of writing captured in just a few lines
Empress Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Ah thank you so very much always for being so supportive. I appreciate your kindness
Pandit Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Moon --a lantern glazed in stars--beautiful imagination, Ink.
Empress Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Thank you so very much dear Vijay always
Sharma  Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 6:01 AM
My gosh, I am loving your exquisite wordsmithery here, "moon sweeps like a lantern" Just when I read this, I was like, wowww! "Glazed in sterling stars" Ahh, the alliteration and the adjective...You've gracefully carved simile here.. Imagining the moon like a lantern.. This overall gives me a magical feeling, that's so pure, celestial and magnificent! Even your micro writes look like works of art, along with your impeccable long writes...I absolutely adore this cute lanterne! :) sending you love
Jones Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Beautiful!
Rhymes Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Mooon dreams … love it
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