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Step Ever So Light - POTD

POTD 7 Oct 2020 Step ever so light Into this treacherous night Creatures that abandon the day come out to play Hear those June winds howl To the hoot of an owl the candle flame flickers ' forewarned is forearmed' There is corruption at play In this treacherous night Step ever so light, ever so light The long arm of equivocation favours Wrong over Right As ordered lives fray The spinning wheel turns Casting shadows upon The power of the judge Will he unravel? While a Puppeteer holds the mighty gavel The blind eye is turned As the forged scales tip towards the stolen people Self-imposing chosen sheeple To play ball they crawl The Universal teachings they fail to recall In this treacherous night that steals your Soul Step ever so light ever so light by Maria Williams 6/10/20 POTD 7 Oct 2020

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/28/2020 6:41:00 PM

An amazing pen Maria, wonderful imagery and insightful expression throughout. This was a joy to behold! Blessings,Gordon

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/5/2020 5:15:00 AM

WOW!! I expect nothing but masterpiece in your work of art. A beautiful poetess like you only penned the best of the best... it’s great to be back my dearest friend :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/17/2020 10:19:00 AM

May nothing ever steal your soul as you walk into the light my friend, you write with so much candor and beauty Have a great day, dear Maria xo

Maria Williams
Date: 10/18/2020 10:37:00 PM

Thanks Pixie, so lovely to see you. Thanks for the visit and awesome comment, much appreciated my dear sweet friend....Maria Hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/17/2020 6:47:00 AM

So glad to have found and read this wonderful gem of poetry, Maria, deep and so profound, fits the mood of the times...

Maria Williams
Date: 10/18/2020 10:38:00 PM

So glad you liked it Harry, also wonderful to see you again. Hope you are keeping well my friend? Take care, much appreciated as always....Maria Hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2020 5:12:00 AM

Amazing write. I love your skills and muse :) a master at work :) God bless you with many many more

Maria Williams
Date: 10/18/2020 10:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Regina, So glad you liked it so much. Much appreciate both your visit and comment....Maria Hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 10/12/2020 12:24:00 PM

What a wonderful write Maria, welcome back and congrats on POTD, belated congrats yes, but sincere!

Maria Williams
Date: 10/13/2020 3:24:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by John, so wonderful to see you, I'm glad you liked this poem. I appreciate it my friend....Maria Hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/10/2020 8:44:00 AM

Wonderful... you've brought out the power of your write...a natural...Congratulations Maria on POTD

Maria Williams
Date: 10/12/2020 2:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Arturo, I'm so happy that you liked it. Appreciate the support always....Maria Hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/9/2020 8:44:00 AM

What magnificence flows from the deep well of your artistic intellect, my sweet sister. It's so great to see you back! Your poetic pen spills black imagery but precious and striking golden ink in this metaphorical beauty. An ominous and potent piece expressing caution and fears in these dark days. Your poem shines with your brilliance, dear Maria. These are treacherous times, indeed.. hold on to your soul. Gripping, dramatic and beautifully composed, congratulations for your very worthy honor of POTD for this masterwork! A fav!! The musical accompaniment is amazing.. Warmest wishes to you and yours, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Maria Williams
Date: 10/12/2020 2:54:00 AM

Susan my dear sweet friend ,how wonderful to see you here. As always I deeply appreciate your profound comments, poetry in itself. How are you my sweet Soul Sister? I think of you often and so good to see you posting again. You have been missed. An inspiration to all of us your amazing poetry is. Thank you for appreciating this piece, as you know, I dont get much chance writing these days, what with babysitting and putting in time at the office. Cant complain though, we are so fortunate. Considering everything thats happened this year, things are all good. Warmest wishes to you and yours also my friend. Take care always xox

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/8/2020 2:18:00 AM

Congratulations Robert on your wonderfully romantic and creative POTD. I sensed another metaphorical love story in your imagery of the moon and oak tree in the first four lines and last two lines of your sonnet. With the arms of the oak tree embracing the moon. Exquisite poetry my friend. Take care...Peace in your heart...g

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/7/2020 3:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. What a story/write. Enjoy your win and day......

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:35:00 PM

Thank you Paula, that's very kind. So glad you liked it....Maria Hugs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/7/2020 2:19:00 PM

"There is corruption at play" Yes, in more ways than one. "The candle flickers, casting shadows upon Wrong over Right" Many see the light, yet- those refusing to follow, will always stand in the darkness. So sad indeed, those turning away from the truth. This is deep and powerful. Welcome back Maria. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:38:00 PM

Yes, you got that right Brandy, in more ways than one. One must be cautious.Sad state of affairs. I hope everything is well with you? Miss you all, take care, and thanks always for the support....Maria Hugs

Sierra Chen

Date: 10/7/2020 9:30:00 AM

well done!!!

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:38:00 PM

Thank you Sierra, both for the visit and comment....Maria Hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/7/2020 9:29:00 AM

First day back and you get POTD.... Congrats

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:39:00 PM

I know, it does feel good to write again. Thanks Si....Maria Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/7/2020 9:09:00 AM

Many congratulations on having this creative poem honored with POTD Maria. Blessings xxoo

Maria Williams
Date: 10/8/2020 12:05:00 AM

My dearest friend, I went to have a look at your poems, and was so sad to read about your husbands passing. My condolences to you and your loving family. I cannot imagine what you must be going through.

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:42:00 PM

Thank you Connie. How are you and your beautiful family? Your lovely island paradise must be wonderful at this time of year? Sydney is getting quite warm now. Take care and love to all....Maria Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/7/2020 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations Maria! love this write, Linda

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:43:00 PM

Thank you Linda, that's very lovely of you. So glad you liked it....Maria Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2020 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Maria, great write. Eve

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:43:00 PM

Thanks Eve, I so appreciate the visit and comments always....Maria Love and Hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/7/2020 7:53:00 AM

Ominous and elegant ink. Congratulations on POTD Maria, xomo!

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:45:00 PM

Hey Mo, how are you? Its so good to see you, appreciate the visit and support always. Love and Hugs...Maria

John Watt

Date: 10/7/2020 7:45:00 AM

Maria, congratulations on your POTD for this artistic creation describing dark times. Enjoy the honor ~ John

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:46:00 PM

Thank you John, so appreciate the visit and comment. Glad you liked it....Maria Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/7/2020 6:41:00 AM

My congratulations.

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Victor, so nice to see you here. Feels like old times. Take care, love and hugs....Maria

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/7/2020 4:48:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats Maria on poem of the day. Enjoy your day.

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:48:00 PM

Thanks for the revisit my friend Vijay. I always appreciate the support you show....Maria Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2020 4:41:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Maria - You describe it so vividly :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Take care, my friend :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 8:51:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise, lovely to see you too, miss all of you lovely people, but as you know life this year for me has become a bit hectic, but I look forward to one day soon posting as much as I used to. Take care my dear friend.....Maria Hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/7/2020 2:08:00 AM

My great pleasure to be back for giving due value to your wonderful poetry, dearest Maria! Congratulations on your POTD honour! So well earned recognition! My warmest wishes for a great happy time! Love and hugs.

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 3:10:00 AM

Thanks my dearest Besma, so lovely to see you again. Thanks for the support always and the revisit my friend....Maria Hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/7/2020 1:26:00 AM

Its like we are living like that now, the whole world has changed. Beautifully composed Maria, lovely to see you Congratulations on a well deserved honour of POTD. Tom

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 3:12:00 AM

So lovely to see you too my dear friend Tom. How are you and all the family doing? Thanks for the support always....Maria Hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/7/2020 1:14:00 AM

This is a fave for me Silent One - you sound like the best dad in the world and your daughter will understand everything one day. My father was like that with me - until I was 13 I was the son he never had and we used to fish camp, run races. But at 14 he suddenly realized I had become his teenage princess and treat me like one - he was also the hero of my whole existence. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Congratulations dear friend on a wonderful POTD a great honor, enjoy the day.

Carole Duet

Date: 10/7/2020 12:20:00 AM

Wow, Maria! What a fantastic piece of art. And, it speaks volumes about the times in which we live. Life is so fragile. "Step light." I love it. Also, the music was the perfect backdrop as was the weird (lol) art, which was amazing. Faved forever.

Maria Williams
Date: 10/7/2020 3:15:00 AM

Yeah I thought the music was a great choice , I was looking for that slightly ominous, dramatic touch. Love the music of Yakura, and Stive Morgan combined, and the art... out of this world!. Thanks for the visit my dear sweet friend and the fave too....Maria Hugs