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Steamy Windows - a Bawdy Little Number

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POEM BASED ON AN OLD JOKE A village copper was on his beat When he saw a parked car rocking The rate that it was moving It really was quite shocking The windows were steaming up He flashed his torch through the window A couple were on the backseat The ladies legs were all a kimbo The guy winds down the car window Saying I’m with my dance partner Fran We’re trying to perfect the Tango We do it wherever we can! The copper goes about his duties Later he comes across the same car It was parked around the corner The ‘dancers’ hadn’t moved too far Again the car was rocking This time to a latin beat The pace of it was shocking again the couple were on the back seat So he taps upon the window This time the lady pops up her head She says we’re practising the Foxtrot I must perfect my moves with Fred The copper says he will be on his way As he gets a mobile phone call The couple climb into the front seat Hoping their engine doesn’t stall A little while later he sees the same car It is rocking at an alarming rate There's condensation running down the windows The occupants he is about to berate So he bangs upon the window Saying I bet you're doing the Bossanova The red faced girl says no officer - I'm doing the boss a favour! 7/28/18

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/30/2018 7:53:00 PM

Jan, you done did dood it! Wow! ~ gw

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 4:22:00 AM

lol thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/29/2018 10:39:00 PM

G'day Jan … what a classic yarn in rhyme Jan. Light hearted, humorous, and really entertaining - thank you - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2018 5:36:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2018 9:07:00 PM

I love it Jan! You tell the story with such precise humor that I was mesmerized to get to the end! Best of luck with this gem! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2018 5:36:00 AM

Just a fun poem Connie, I get these silly ideas and have to get them into a poem :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2018 3:09:00 PM

OH MY, you really did a superb job of telling the joke in poetry fashion!! Is this the one you had wanted me to see? Or is it the newest one, the haibun? Let me go see what your haibun is.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2018 3:15:00 PM

It was this one Andrea, I wasn't sure how it would be received but I've had such awesome comments lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/29/2018 12:14:00 PM

Oh my...what a super rocking poem this is, Jan:) Love the ending!! I always wanted to take up ballroom dancing, but my feet refused to cooperate! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2018 12:17:00 PM

LOL Paul I am so glad the poem has been well received and had such lovely comments:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 7/29/2018 5:53:00 AM

Brilliant Jan, just what I needed on this wet and windy morning, so funny and so well written.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2018 5:57:00 AM

Thanks Roy, we have rain rain and more rain which is much needed !:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/29/2018 1:30:00 AM

If that car's rockin', don't bother knockin! Great fun, Jan. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2018 2:51:00 AM

lol Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/28/2018 9:51:00 PM

I Just about spit out my drink on this! LOL so funny!!!!!!!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2018 2:51:00 AM

Thanks Art glad I made you smile with my silliness lol:-) hugs Jan

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2018 4:52:00 PM

Oh, my, the words for this poem have not been invented yet, Jan. Thanks for the laugh.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2018 5:02:00 PM

lol thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 7/28/2018 4:49:00 PM

Hey Jan, that scene played out in a cemetery. The officer asked "didn't you see the sign that said KEEP OUT"? The occupants answered "No officer, we saw the sign that said "GET A LOT WHILE YOUR YOUNG".

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2018 5:00:00 PM

ha ha ha love it John:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/28/2018 4:20:00 PM

lol thats fun :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2018 4:22:00 PM

Cheers Cas!:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/28/2018 3:49:00 PM

I saw the Title, thought of Tina Turner, then read an amazing story. So a favour, is a supernova, wow. Jan your humour is number one.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2018 4:09:00 PM

Love that comment Harry!! you would smile as the first car I purchased when I passed my driving test was a Vauxhall Nova lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/28/2018 3:10:00 PM

Bawdy, indeed, Jan! I'm blushing (Right! LOL.) Good one, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thanks Janice I had fun weaving the joke into a poem lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/28/2018 2:38:00 PM

Were they on strictly? Brilliant verse Jan. Your muse knows how to tango. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2018 3:10:00 PM

ha ha ha love that comment Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/28/2018 12:22:00 PM

she was doing the favor quite well....sweating windows make that easy to tell....she wanted a raise so we made a deal....they call me areosmith, i rock cars off the wheel....and that is what she heard....so to get what she thought she deserved....she did all i wanted in ALL CAPS....and if that copper would have stopped following us, we could have been called it a rap....lol....as always jan, you are the jester....lol....i Love your sense of humor....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2018 12:40:00 PM

Thanks Eric, I never know what will flow from my pen next, just happy I can make folks smile and forget their troubles for a wee while:-) hugs Jan xx