Steamy, Sultry Night In the Vieux Carre

walking slow, oh it could be called dancing
crowded with Bourbon Street night people
music filling the air, we stop every so often
wrapped arms around each other and swayed

firing up to the already hot-blood New Orleans
seems to affect all the out-of-town tourists and
the nights are specially made for physical reaction
big easy, sin city, whatever, a city of cool coitus

her willowy body pressed so close to mine
her face in my neck nuzzling and groping
I feel her eyelashes teasing, pleasing, my neck
we're fused together with lover's super glue

she broke away, her café au lait eyes dancing
as she tiptoed up to speak softly in my ear
in her intense and absolute Cajun accent
sha, we gon stay out heah on da street all night

lovely Denise didn't need to say anymore
I danced her back to her pad above Galatoire's 
and it wasn't just to get the grime off when 
we showered with plenty of soap and water
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:31 PM
wowowow. Is it also for the seduction contest? VERY good writing. Love your description of this New Orleans love dance.
Smith Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 7:26 PM
What time does the video play :)...cheers
Bolton Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Heh.Heh Good one Tim . . .
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:55 PM
poem sure is steamy and sultry - excellent imagery:-) Hugs jan xxx please look at my haiku footprints - its got a tribute to you on it. hugs jan xxx
Bolton Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Thank you, Jan, for the comment and the hug, and here is one back(((((hug))))) Tribute to me? Come on now.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 12:49 PM
really love the style you drew this in jerry
Bolton Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Thanks Liam, since I live close to Sin City I find it comes natural. Thank you.
Yvonne Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:25 AM
This is really quite good. I enjoyed its unique flavor.
Bolton Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Maurice, I appreciate the read and the comment. Hope you have a good day.
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