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Steamy, Sultry Night In the Vieux Carre

walking slow, oh it could be called dancing crowded with Bourbon Street night people music filling the air, we stop every so often wrapped arms around each other and swayed firing up to the already hot-blood New Orleans seems to affect all the out-of-town tourists and the nights are specially made for physical reaction big easy, sin city, whatever, a city of cool coitus her willowy body pressed so close to mine her face in my neck nuzzling and groping I feel her eyelashes teasing, pleasing, my neck we're fused together with lover's super glue she broke away, her café au lait eyes dancing as she tiptoed up to speak softly in my ear in her intense and absolute Cajun accent sha, we gon stay out heah on da street all night lovely Denise didn't need to say anymore I danced her back to her pad above Galatoire's and it wasn't just to get the grime off when we showered with plenty of soap and water

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Date: 10/9/2014 8:31:00 PM
wowowow. Is it also for the seduction contest? VERY good writing. Love your description of this New Orleans love dance.
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Date: 10/8/2014 7:26:00 PM
What time does the video play :)...cheers
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/8/2014 8:25:00 PM
Heh.Heh Good one Tim . . .
Date: 10/8/2014 2:55:00 PM
poem sure is steamy and sultry - excellent imagery:-) Hugs jan xxx please look at my haiku footprints - its got a tribute to you on it. hugs jan xxx
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/8/2014 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for the comment and the hug, and here is one back(((((hug))))) Tribute to me? Come on now.
Date: 10/8/2014 12:49:00 PM
really love the style you drew this in jerry
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/8/2014 5:39:00 PM
Thanks Liam, since I live close to Sin City I find it comes natural. Thank you.
Date: 10/8/2014 11:25:00 AM
This is really quite good. I enjoyed its unique flavor.
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/8/2014 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, Maurice, I appreciate the read and the comment. Hope you have a good day.

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