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'Stay With Me'

It started off as an ordinary day
As most unpleasant days normally do
In fact, by the time the whole… incident happened
The whole day was just about through

It was a great blur for the most part
The impact threw us clear out of our car seats
My best friend, my soulmate Andy Willow
Accompanied me on those busy LA streets

Sure, I was hurt, but Andy was worse
I rushed away to use any phone I could find
They said “No, don’t leave! Please stay with me!”
I thought desperately, “Go back! Rewind!”

To my utter shock and surprise, it did
Woke up to the sight of my calendar on the very same date
It had only taken me a few reruns to realize
I might have control over Andy’s fate

I tried all the oldest and newest tricks in the book
Must’ve been stuck on that one day for a lifetime
Did every single thing in my power and then some
Some attempts had no reason or rhyme

Tried to change little things, like the way that I speak
No luck, “Go back! Rewind!”
Tried to avoid that particular street
Zero change. “Go back! Rewind!”

Tried to steer clear from cars entirely
There would always be another fatal occurrence, “Go back. Rewind.”
“But their last wish was for me to stay with them!”
It didn’t matter in the end, “Go back. Rewind.”

It was on what I now know as my last rerun
I finally let Andy finish speaking
And little did I know I’d been cutting them off
When they had the way out I’d been seeking

I thought it would be evil, I thought I’d be cowardly
I thought I’d be selfish if I left them behind
Their real last wish: “Before I go, promise me
That your life won’t end with mine.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 11/19/2024 7:09:00 PM
Hi Willow, Does a poem need to be understood to be felt, or rise to the occasion? So much in the timeline you expressed, though I don't understand as much as felt. Then again, I don't understand everything about trees. Still have a good feeling from nature, from trees. Thank you for the branches, even the broken ones, written in this poem. -Richard
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