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Stay the Course

Heels clipped and branded falling on my face well behind the sprinters in this the human race Dirt and muck prevalent rolling through the dust it's not to be envisioned stepping in mistrust Blinders mask the problems disguised a step or two but when the bottle's empty what you going to do Stay the course real steady pushing while the others plead for fattened are the leaders slowly filling up on greed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/8/2017 6:00:00 AM
Well done my friend...you've stayed the poetic course...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/7/2017 9:42:00 AM
Preach on, Tim...preach on...
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Date: 11/6/2017 8:11:00 PM
I like all that has been said here, staying the course is not always easy! However come over for Pizza, we might fatten up, just not with greed! :)
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Date: 11/6/2017 7:24:00 PM
In meetings we use the phrase, "stay the course" quite often. It takes encouragement to endure trials. Good write, Tim.
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Date: 11/6/2017 5:11:00 PM
I love this poem, a few messages going on in there, well written and free flowing, really enjoyed it, regards, Kevin
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Date: 11/6/2017 5:03:00 PM
Horses for courses, Tim! Love your work, my friend!
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Date: 11/6/2017 4:28:00 PM
I like the lyrical feel to this beautiful write Tim, Very nicely penned..
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Date: 11/6/2017 3:19:00 PM
Well done Tim. :)
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