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a puff of steam a drip of dew a sip of water an entire drink a glass that's is full can make a pool on the ground add more water and there'd be a pond let it rain and make a stream joined with gravity and other streams down to the creek the creek that flows into a lake or a river who knows old man river, old man river must know something but he don't say nuthin he just keeps on rolling along goin to the ocean to be with tsunami's and tidal waves sunsets and peacefull bays all depends on the order of the day splash, a small part of me has landed in the sun soon to be a puff of steam another life begun

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Date: 5/28/2012 1:25:00 PM
Nicely done. Catching up on your poems as I am behind in my reading. love phyl
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:28:00 PM
Well,,,, Well,,,, Well,,,, such nice poetry ;} you have a blessed day ;}
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:05:00 AM
lovely reflection of life. Bravo.
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:00:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness John III. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:04:00 PM
I like this blank verse John. Flows nicely like the water you portray. Well done in my humble opinion
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Date: 5/3/2012 7:27:00 PM
I was just thinkin' yesterday that in my next life, I'd like to be a lichen... Somehow your poem recalled that thought to me, thanks. Namaste~N
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Date: 5/3/2012 7:39:00 PM
why not a puff of stem
Date: 5/2/2012 8:54:00 PM
yes, it's all one big round, from stream to dew and all the way to ocean and then back again. VERY nice, john. Deep!
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Date: 4/19/2012 9:44:00 PM
Hi John, Great poem. Can't see why you can't use the same name for a poem. Cheers, Mauree
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Date: 4/12/2012 2:38:00 PM
Enjoyed the progression in this write ;)
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Date: 4/10/2012 3:03:00 PM
I hope your stem day is way off in the future..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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