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Oh, stay with me for always love though I may pull away, or strike your cheek with brazen hand, then tease you with my play. Pledge your heart my cherished one, though deeds do not deserve. My words cry out from silent tongue. Why have I lost my nerve? Spare me tears from love’s lost nights and lonely days, sun-spilled, a flood of light could never quench soul’s thirst, I live for still. A need or want, I won't define no scores I'd dare to keep, for love’s own breath whispered in ear can cause my heart to leap. I pray mistakes of past won't cost my love or morrow’s trust. No roses bloom without the thorns; no hearth warms without dust. So if you go, my love from me I’ll know it's all my fault. To borrow time, I’ll beg and plead ‘til pounding heart does halt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/30/2015 12:42:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem Rhonda! Amazing pen!
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:04:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:19:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:43:00 AM
This is poetry, I believe all judging is subjective. Surely the sponsor has a right to judge as he sees fit. This for me deserves a placement at the very least. A Fav! Congratulations Rhonda on your HM!
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:12:00 AM
RHONDA, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:26:00 AM
Just beautiful!
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:00:00 PM
Well done . . . this is a wonderful poem -- the rhythms of love, heartache, life . . . the begging of forgiveness . . . loved it dear friend.
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Date: 1/5/2015 12:19:00 PM
Beautiful pen Rhonda ! I really enjoyed your very romantic poem very dear friend . Bittersweet at its best! A 7 from me! I wish you the best in 2015! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."
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Date: 1/5/2015 10:46:00 AM
am i reading Keats Shelly here, i may well be,, this is lovely so out of time yet so in time,,love it Rhonda
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:13:00 AM
Superbly composed, Rhonda! Beautifully structured! Lovely lines! Much enjoyed!! :-) john.
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Date: 1/5/2015 4:04:00 AM
- What a heartbreaking and beautiful poem, Rhonda - I hope your Monday will be fine :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/5/2015 3:56:00 AM
OH OH OH OH! Loved this, Rhonda. WOW! Absolutely amazing. The kind of writing I love most...romance! Is it for the contest of LOVE JUSTICE? It surely fits that theme.
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